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1、写作训练的思路,写一完整的句子:,句子的完整 句子的连贯 句子的简洁 句子的多样化,主题句, 扩展句, 结论句,设计一个段落:,基础写作,读写任务,写一个完整的句子,这几句是正确的句子吗? 如果你认为有误, 该怎么改?,1.The meeting will until 3:00.,2.Work hard, you will succeed.,3.I have a brother, who is a doctor. 4. There are only 4 students take part in the class.,last,and,who,taking/to take,句子的分类,简单句:
2、 只包含一个主谓结构的句子. 并列句: 主谓结构+ 连词(and, but, so, or) +主谓结构 (或更多的主谓结构) 复合句: 引导词+主谓结构, 主谓结构 (从句) (主句),五种基本的简单句,主语+不及物动词 2. 主语+及物动词+宾语 3. 主语+系动词+表语 4. 主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语 5. 主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语,1.The sport first appeared in 1896,2.He got up very late yesterday morning.,3.That evening we talked a great deal.,4.The
3、 meeting will last two hours.,5.The May Fourth Movement broke out in Beijing in 1919.,6. Great changes have taken place in my home town in the past ten years.,1.We did a survey among 600 students.,.2.I wrote a letter last night.,3.My father can speak English fluently.,4.He pointed out the mistakes i
4、n my composition.,5.You can depend on him in your work.,6.After writing a composition, we must go over it.,1.Koalas in wildlife parks cant fall asleep,2.This book is about the history of the United States.,3.Her job is to look after the children in the nursery.,4.The report sounds interesting.,5. At
5、 the age of fifteen he became a famous pianist.,6.Children , keep quiet please.,2. Grandma told me an interesting story last night,3.Would you please pass me the dictionary.,4.My father has bought me a new bike.,1.My parents bought me a pair of shoes.,5.This term I have written three letters to my p
6、arents.,6.He showed the ticket to the conductor.,1.Their behavior made him angry.,2.All of us consider him honest.,3. He asked us to join in the game.,4. I want you to tell me the truth.,5. Every morning we hear him read English aloud.,6.We will make our school more beautiful.,1、 改变句子的开头方式,句子不要一味都用主
7、语开头，接着是 谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。 可以把状语置于句首， 或用分词作状语等。 试比较：,Early in themorning, we met .,试改变下列句子,使之变化多样,生动有力,We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning .,The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.,My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.,Hea
8、ring the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.,2.The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.,2、在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两 个句式。,在一篇文章中,要灵活运用诸如 强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、 倒装句、省略句等。,It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.,A.强调句,The dog has saved my Little sister bravely.,What we had to
9、 do was to stand there，trying to catch the offender.,B.主从复合句,We had to stand there to catch the offender.,The driver escaped without stopping，leaving the old man lying on the road.,C.分词短语，由with或without引导的短语,The driver escaped and didnt stop，he left the old man lying on the road.,Not until 11：30 did
10、I go to bed .,D.倒装句,I went to bed at 11：30.,While crossing the street， you should be careful.,E.省略句,While you are crossing the street，you should be careful.,He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.,F.通过分句和合句 ，增强句子的连贯性和表现力,1.He stop us an hour ago .He made us catch the next offf
11、ender.,After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.,We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.,Weak as I am , I will make the effort .,Although I am weak, I will make the effort.,He left without saying goodbye.,e left and didnt say good-bye.,Open , and you.,
12、病句:Open the door, you can see a bed on your left.,If you open , you.,Hearing the news, I was shocked.,病句:Hear the news, I was shocked.,I was shocked at the news.,试比较下列改写的句子.,Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while you are crossing the street?,Do you know the man s
13、peaking at the meeting?,Look out for cars while crossing the street?,2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子, 划线部分重复, 应删掉).,1).He is blind in both eyes. He is blind in the left eye. 2).In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. 3).The desk is round in shape and red in color. 4).I shall accompany my mother by going
14、 with her to the market.,练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁,1. He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. 2. The Great Wall, which has a history of more than 2000 years, is one of the world heritages.,He gave many reasons for the failure, but none of them was convincing.,The Gr
15、eat Wall with a history of more than 2000 years is one of the world heritages.,练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁,3. He attended the party though he was badly ill. 4. Nie Er, who is the composer of the National Anthem for the Peoples Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912.,He attended the party in spi
16、te of his illness.,Nie Er, the composer of the National Anthem for the Peoples Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912.,练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁,5.He suggested that he be sent to tend the sick. 6.To my surprise, I was surprised to find no one there when I got there. 7.A teacher who has experience should have an idea about what he should do in such a condition.,He suggested being sent to tend the sick.,I was surprised to
