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1、Welcome to ES,上海高考英语书面表达,写作共25分.各档次评分细则如下表所示. 评分标准 1.本题总分为25分,其中内容10分,语言10分,组织结构5分. 2.评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点,应用词汇,语言结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性. 3.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次,然后对照相应的组织结构档次给与加分.其中,内容和语言两部分相加,得15分或以上者,可考虑加4-5分,15分以下者只能考虑加0,1,2,3分. 4.词数少于70,总分最多不超过10分. 各档次给分要求: A.内容充实,主题突出,详略得当. B.内容较充实,能表达出作文要求. C.内容基本充实
2、,尚能表达出作文要求. D.漏掉或未能写出清楚主要内容,有些内容与主题无关. E.明显漏掉主要内容,严重离题.,评分标准,命题趋势,1.形式开放性；半开放性 开放作文考查学生思辨及逻辑思维层面，学生可联想生活中方方面面，写出内容健康充实、逻辑清晰、语言地道、交际得体、思维活跃而紧扣主题的内秀外美的佳作。 半开放式作文较多的是提示作文、看图作文、图表作文。半开放式作文要求考生自我组织文字和发挥的余地较大，不仅要求观点明确、论述合情合理，文章层次还要清晰，语言方面要精练，行文要准确易懂。,2. 内容与时俱进；贴近生活 如08年上海卷：题目作文题目是“班级将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛，班长希望大家
3、积极参与。请对此谈谈你的想法”。这个话题吻合了教育部提出的开展校园集体舞的热点，考生和老师都觉得这是一个很不错的作文题目，考生们有话要说，有话可说，这样的作文题有助于考生发挥出真实的英语语言水平，又很好地达到高考写作检测的目的。属于半开放性的作文。,复习策略,1平时要坚持背诵一些高考真题的优秀范文，有意识地学习、记忆范文当中常用的短语、重点句型，模仿范文关联词以及复合句的使用。 2强化基本句型和常用句型的训练，熟悉各种文体的结构和段落层次的写作方法；同时要进一步丰富词汇量，学会使用高级词汇及复杂句式。,写作秘诀,先读提示，弄清要点与格式； 时态、语态要当心，前后呼应要一致 句子结构要搭配，语言
4、习惯莫违背； 文章写好要细看，点滴错误不放过。,增加文采小窍门,1.在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。 2使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 3改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词短语等。 4学会使用过渡词。如： 1）递进：furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, then etc. 2）转折：however, but, nevertheless, after all etc. 3）总结
5、：finally, at last, in brief, to conclude 4）强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all etc. 5）对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand, etc. 5避免重复使用同一单词或词组。 6.注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。,首先读两篇小小短文，并说说你的看法 Yesterday went fishing it rained he went back quickly he had no fish that day . 2
6、. Yesterday Peter went fishing on the way to the river it suddenly began to rain heavily as a result he had to return quickly with no fish to take home 你看出了什么问题，哪一篇意思更明了，应怎样修改？,1.Yesterday Peter went fishing .It rained. He went back quickly .He had no fish that day . 2.Yesterday Peter went fishing .
7、On the way to the river it suddenly began to rain heavily. As a result ,he had to return quickly with no fish to take home . 小短文是这样，高考作文更应讲究结构严谨，过渡自然，条理清晰 ，中心明确。 那么，怎样才能快速达到这一要求呢？,Introduction,Body/ content,Conclusion,Hamburger writing,2011年高考语法复习,13,写好“三段式”作文,所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。三段式的模式写法通常为：
8、 第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间、地点、人物和主要事情及时点出。 常用于文章开头的句型： 1)As is seen in the picture, ;What is shown in the chart is 2)I am a ; I am writing to 2) There is a general discussion today about the issue of.; Those who object to. argue that .;They believe that.; But people who favor ., on the other hand, a
9、rgue that . 4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that. .,4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that. 5) Now it is commonly held that .; they think .; But I doubt whether. 6) Recently the issue of. has been brought to public attention. 7) One of the great men once sai
10、d that. Now more and more people share this belief. 8) Until recently, . has been regarded as. But people are taking a fresh look at it. 9) Sb. argues/maintains /holds/insists/believes that. 10) There is no denying/doubt that .,2. 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或把事情发展的经 过详细写出来。 用于论证和说明的句型： 1) We may cite/quote an ex
11、ample to illustrate. 2) Our society abounds with the examples of . 3) A recent study indicates/suggests/shows that. 4) According to the statistics provided by., it can be seen that. 5) There is good/sufficient evidence to show that. 6) No one can ignore/overlook the fact that.,常用谚语 (在议论文中): 1) As a
12、saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 2) As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you dont deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides. 3) As a proverb
13、 says, “Where there is a will there is a way.” 4) As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.” 5) As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”,3.最后一段，得出结论或结果。 用于文章结尾的句型： 1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come
14、to/reach the conclusion that . 2) It is high time that we put /special emphasis on . 3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of ., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in. 4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but
15、 none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way. .,5) There is little doubt/denying that . 6) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of.require immediate attention. 7) As far as I am concerned, I believe/think that . 8) In conclusion,. 9) In my opinion, I am in favo
16、r of . 10) In short,. should learn to.; Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly. 写好三段式作文，不仅要掌握各段的常用句式，还要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂”。恰当地使用,过渡词可避免结构松散，层次不明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有： 递进型：whats more，worse still，moreover，furthermore 等； 解释型：that is (to say)，in other words，or 等； 转折型：however，but although，otherwise，on the contrary 等； 列举型：firstly.secondly.finally，on the one hand，on the other
