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1、,Welcome,永宁二中 宋 艳,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,Beautify your composition,高考作文的华丽变身,遇难心不慌,遇易心更细,What we will do in this class: 1. Learn to beautify your composition by using advanced vocabulary、sentence patterns and proper linking words;,2. Learn to develop sentences in order to make the con
2、tent rich and coherent.,太稀了,太乱了,段落呢？,标点呢？,即使长发及腰，也遮盖不住满是错误的事实！,Handwriting also counts!,three C clean clear correct,评分细则： 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 优秀（22-25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。 良好（18-21）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。 一般（15-17）：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已
3、影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。 较差（11-14）：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。 差（6-10）：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。 极差（0-5）：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。,高考英语阅卷特点：,1. 阅卷时间短； 2. 阅卷速度快； 3. 阅卷老师的心理状态：给分中庸 4. 高考阅卷其余部分是标准化计分,书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股,What makes a good writing?,1. 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。,
4、Computers are very important in our life.,Computers play a very important role in our life.,Computers are of great importance in our life.,短语代替单词,advanced vocabulary,同义词的使用,2. He is a _(聪明的) boy. 3._,(我认为) Nan Shan Nan by Zhang Lei is a really warm song.,bright / smart / intelligent,As far as I am c
5、oncerned / Personally,4.The teachers think the writing is very important.,The teachers_ the writing.,great importance to,attach,2._,(众所周知的是)，the newly learnt words will soon be forgotten unless we use them in everyday communication.,1.不但而且 not onlybut as well In Ningxia, you can _ taste yummy food _
6、can visit some famous tourists attractions _.,As is known to us,not only,but,as well,sentence patterns,3.The + 比较级, the +比较级(越越),你越努力，你越进步。,The harder you work，the more progress you will make.,4. 毫无疑问，大声朗读英语很有益。,_reading English loudly is of great benefit.,There is no doubt that,5.The reason why is
7、that +句子(的原因是),我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。,_we have to grow trees_they can supply fresh air for us.,The reason why,is that,Only in this way can you solve the problem.,1. You can solve the problem in this way.,Only +状语置于句首倒装结构,一、运用倒装,2. When I put the idea idea into practice , I found my English far from
8、 satisfying.,_did I find my English far from satisfying.,Only when I put the idea into practice,grammar structures,It should be a good idea_,It is imprtant for you to do morning exercises.,二、 运用 it作形式主语,1. You should do morning exercises. It is important.,2. Youd better learn and sing English songs.
9、,to learn and sing English songs.,三、使用非限定性定语从句,1. The weather turned out to be very good. It was more than we could expect. （一般）,The weather turned out to be very good, _,which was more than we could expect. （高级）,2.May be I will work as a volunteer in my spare time, _(这将丰富我的生活) 。,which will make my
10、life colorful.,which is able to enrich my life.,时间(顺序)：firstly.secondlyfinally ,meanwhile. 并列或递进关系： not onlybut also, besides, whats more, in addition. 原因： because (of), thanks to, due to, as a result of. 对照或比较：while, compared with , instead (of), rather than, on the contrary, on the one hand, on th
11、e other hand. 举例：for example / instance, takefor example. 列举：such as, like,proper linking words,觉得没话说,Develop sentences,假设你是永宁中学学生会主席李华，你校将于11月18日校庆期间接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排他们的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。 1.上午与我校学生座谈； 2.中午与我校学生共同进餐； 3.下午与我校学生游览永宁。 注意： 1. 次数不少于10
12、0； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。,1.上午与我校学生座谈； American students will have a talk with Chinese students.,Q1:Whats its purpose?,2.中午与我校学生共同进餐； American students will have lunch in the school canteen.,Q2: What traditional Chinese food will be served?,3.下午与我校学生游览永宁。 In the afternoon, Ame
13、rican students will visit Yongning.,Q3:What can the students in Yongning High School tell about Yongning?,1. In order to have a better understanding of each other, well have a talk in the morning. 2. We will have lunch together in the school dinning hall, where the traditional Chinese food such as j
14、iaozi will be served. 3. In the afternoon, we will visit Yongning, enjoying some customs of Hui people.,假如你是永宁中学学生会主席李华,访问团成员Peter回国后来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 阅读中文书刊； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter aski
15、ng for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.,Sample version:Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, by which youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever po
