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1、.,中考 “新冠肺炎类”作文讲解,书面表达 云南师大附中呈贡校区 2020届英语备课组,.,高分写作五要素,1. 结构：三段式（Hamburger writing） 第一段：背景介绍（提出观点）：简单明了，开门见山 第二段：故事发展 ：叙述事件，论证观点 第三段：总结观点：不照抄，有升华，有希望，提建议 2.要点：全面，围绕中心 3.逻辑：运用逻辑过渡词（递进，转折的，总结等） 4.语法: 词法（用词准确；名词单复数；形副修饰关系；） 句法（时态一致；主谓一致；语态；三单；被动） 5.亮点：高级词汇，词组，句型；个人情感升华,.,高分写作：三段四步法,1. 三段：三段式写作 2. 四步：（1）
2、 审题（主题，体裁，时态，人称，内容） （2）打草稿（规避错误，锤炼语言） （3）正文写作（凝练文章，调整词句） （4）检查： a.查内容：内容完整，不遗漏 b.查语法：名词单复数；冠词、介词缺失； 时态；语态；三单等； c.变句式,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达讲解与分析,An Unexpected Spring Festival 2020年1月24日是中国的传统节日一春节，但受新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响，今年全国上下都笼罩在疫情的阴影下，过着一个非比寻常的春节，请以“An Unexpected Spring Festival”为题，记录你度过的这个特殊春节。 提示: novel coronavirus
3、 pneumonia 新型冠状病毒肺炎 outbreak爆发mask口罩 medical observation at home居家医学观察 要求: 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。,.,新冠肺炎类表达解析：审题,An Unexpected Spring Festival 2020年1月24日是中国的传统节日一春节，但受新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响，今年全国上下都笼罩在疫情的阴影下，过着一个 非比寻常的春节，请以“An Unexpected Spring Festiv
4、al”为题，记录你度过的这个特殊春节。 提示: novel coronavirus pneumonia 新型冠状病毒肺炎 outbreak爆发mask口罩 medical observation at home居家医学观察 要求: 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个: 2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计: 3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：审题,审题误区： 1. 时态错误：你度过的春节 2. 人称错误：你度过的春节 3. 体裁错误：提建议 4. 内容错误：(1) 春节 (2) 集中描述疫情而没有提到春节和 自
5、己的经历 (3) 大量提建议，教别人如何保护自 己（变成倡议书）,一般过去时,“我”不是“我们”,记叙文,寒假（上网课？）,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿,整理思路（列提纲/要点；设计自己的故事内容）,1. 以前的春节什么样？(简单描述，对比),一个特别 的春节,2. 今年为什么特殊？(疫情爆发；居家),3.“我”做了什么？(居家；看新闻；学医护知识；看书；学做菜等，详细叙述),4.“我”得到了什么？(团结；直面困难；克服困难；理解他人等）,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿,词汇及基本表达准备： novel coronavirus pneumonia 新冠肺炎 outbreak爆发 ma
6、sk口罩 medical observation at home居家医学观察 1. the outbreak of NCP：新冠肺炎的爆发 2. break out: The NCP has broken out during the Spring Festival. 3. wear a (face) mask 戴口罩 under medical observation at home： 1) Allcontactshavebeenplacedundermedicalobservation at home. 2) All the Chinese are staying at home for
7、medical observation.,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿,词汇及基本表达准备： 5. 在春节期间：during the Spring Festival 6. 疾病：disease（具体的疾病） illness（病人主观感受;心理疾病 ） 7. 防止病毒传播：avoid virus spreading prevent/stop the virus from spreading 8. 医护人员：medical staff medical workers 9. 白衣天使：angel in white 10. 强调句：It is/was + adj. + (for sb.) + t
8、o do sth. 11. 定语从句：n/代词 +that/which/who等 12. 状语从句：when; if; while;等,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿,第一段：背景介绍（春节：特殊/出乎意料/非比寻常） 例1：The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China, and it is always the time for family staying together. However, with the outbreak of novel coronavirus pneumonia, th
9、is year was quite different from the years before. 例2：This year is the year of the rat. But the Spring Festival was really different from the previous years. Because of the outbreak of novel coronavirus pneumonia, everyone had to hide at home and became a “mouse”.,the past,.,新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿,第二段：叙述事件
10、（内容积极，有意义；正确价值观） 定故事（我在家做的事情），填内容： 1）前后对比（转折过渡词） 以前春节然后今年（拜年；压岁钱；外出游玩） 2）内容简洁明了，不记流水账 描写事件，说明原因，补充论据（为情感升华做铺垫） a.做社区志愿者；（尽力帮助他人） b.学习新技能（记叙学习该技能的过程；分担家务） c.记录每天怎么过的（从早到晚，夹叙夹议；新思考） 3）适当列举，或集中叙述一件事 以小见大，带出自己的感悟和思考,.,打草稿：第二段（讲述具体事件）,例1： During the Spring Festival, I stayed at home all day for its the b
11、est way to prevent the spreading of the virus. On the New Years eve, when I was staying with my family and enjoying the dinner, the medical staff gave up reuniting with their loved ones and stuck to their post fighting against the virus. I was deeply moved and wanted to offer some help. But I have n
12、either the ability to cure the disease nor save people. Just when I was sad, my father found a way for online donation, so I decided to donate all my lucky money through the internet. Although it was not much money, I tried my best and I felt happy and proud.,medical workers,were,there was nothing m
13、uch I can do,stop,advised me to give my lucky money to people in need,.,打草稿：第二段（讲述具体事件）,例2： All my family stayed at home during this special festival. At the beginning, I did not think it was necessary for us to stay at home. But after watching the news, I have learnt that so many people died becaus
14、e of this serious disease. At that moment, I suddenly realized that we were going to experience a hard time. Those days were like a big black cloud hanging over my home, I felt so sad that I did not want to talk. However, on January 26th, I got good news from my father that a scientific group from S
15、hanghai had already developed a new medicine which could prevent the novel coronavirus from spreading. I felt so excited and the black cloud suddenly went away.,first,would,have,stop,scientists/doctors,found,.,打草稿：第三段（总结，情感升华）,例1： The disease is terrible, but the power of all Chinese is even greater
16、. I believe that we can defeat this virus. I am looking forward to taking off my mask and breathe the fresh air in the coming spring. 例2： In this “hiding” Spring Festival, I had more time to read books, do homework, I also learned how to prevent virus and protect myself. I believe we can overcome this, when the spring flowers are blooming and the sun is shining, let us go to Wuhan to enjoy the cherry blos
