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1、Tongxiang NO.2High School bobwang,NMET Specialized Revision on Writing,To strive for your success in writing,当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 1. 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2. 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3. 我的看法及理由 注意：1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出。 2.参考词汇：original work/book in th
2、e original （原著）,2006年浙江高考书面表达,了解2006得分, 力争2007拿高分,抄阅读文章中的句子; 不知所云.得分为0分,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,语言不地道;中文式思维;词汇错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.,有少许语言错误; 得27分,Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story
3、. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the s
4、econd view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,? Its a sample!,Close your eyes an
5、d imagine how much you will score yours !,Do it following me,Be familiar with how to write and then take enough actions to fulfill your dream,Sentence structures and vocabulary,Use correct tenses and contain all the related points Make the sentence structures varied and words or phrases special. 3.
6、Organize the writing well with proper discourse marks,Tenses& points,Discourse markers,Discussion:How to get higher marks ?,1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldnt go to the concert. (现在分词) 2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. (过去分词) 3. He wants to improve his spoken Engli
7、sh. He often talks with the native speakers.(不定式),(一) 、非谓语动词的使用,Being ill in hospital, Susan couldnt go to the concert.,Followed by his students, the professor entered the hall.,In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with the native speakers. Aimed at improving, 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,4. The
8、y havent completed the program. They have to stay there for another two weeks (现在分词)(04上海） 5. We are faced with so much trouble ,we failed to complete the task on time . (过去分词)（06四川） 6. If you want to find more about university course, call (920)746-3789 .(不定式)（05 浙江）,Not having completed the progra
9、m, they have to stay there for two weeks,Faced with so many trouble, we failed to complete the task on time .,To find out more about university courses, call (920)746-3789., 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,he was left alone did he realize his danger.,by changing the plants we eat can we save,Clever she is, she never
10、 works hard.,二、倒装句的使用,stands the clock tower.,Never in my wildest dream could I imagine these people are living in such poor condition,then did I realize how much damage had,Quite student he may be ,he talks ,., there arise some problems,He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone. The teach
11、ers words encouraged her greatly.,三、强调句的使用,It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger.,It was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly.,It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.,3 The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence,1. To our surp
12、rise, he refused to take the position.名词性 2.I wont believe what he says. 状语,What surprised us was that he refused to take ,No matter what you say, I wont believe.,四、从句的使用,3.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless.比较）,The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt.,4. We all know t
13、hat China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.定语,As is known to all, China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.,1. The manager had many problems to solve. He looked worried. (with) 2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted.,With many problems to solve, the manager looked worried.,五、介词短语
14、的使用,On his arrival home , he found his house freshly painted.,使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采,1. The tourists had to ask the villagers for help.,The tourists had no choice but to ask the villagers for help.,2The car was expensive .I cant afford it,The car was so expensive that it was beyond my reach.,3. I had a good
15、 idea.,A good idea struck me./ I came up with a good idea./A good idea occurred to me.,The building is rising up to a noble height and towering over the surrounding ones,Great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant,I am sure it is worth touring .,Im sure
16、it will offer a feast for your eyes,1. Some of the students think it is no use going to college because it is difficult to get jobs,形容词和副词的使用,extremely,satisfactory,4 we are supposed to take sleep , which enables us to have a good rest and be more s,2 it is recommended that we should cultivate the good habit of taking exercise, having a healthy diet also plays an important role in keeping us healthy,5 we sho
