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1、TaskWriting-Howtodevelopaparagraphinanexpositionorargumentation?,Learningaims,1)2),学生的压力来源Sample1Maybesomeonewillaskwhythestudentsshouldrelax.Asastudent,wemustdothehomeworkeveryday,anddealwithschoolwork.Forexample,Whatsmore,wefeellotsofpressurefromstudies.,是否该建此墙Sample2Somestudentsthinkthestresswall
2、shouldbebuilt,becausetheyhavestress.Theymayfeelpressurefromparents,teachersandeventhemselves.Iagreetobuildthestresswall.Studentscanrelaxthemselvesandtakeawaystressinthisway.Sample3Obviously,thewallshouldbebuilt.Itcannotonlybutalso.However,problemcantbesolvedinsuchasimpleway.,理想的大学生活。(2008广东高考)Sample
3、4Afterfinishingmyhighschoollife,Iampreparingmyselfforcollegelife.IamsoexcitedandIalsolookingforwardtothecollegelife.SoIimaginemuchaboutit.Thecollegelifewillbewonderfulandfree.,Skills:Putitattheverybeginning.Statedirectlyandclearlywhatyouregoingtowrite.,a.学生的压力来源(梁清华)Itsobviousthatmostofstudentsfeela
4、lotofpressurefromstudyorotherreasons./Nowadays,studentsareundergreatpressure,whichmainlycomesfromtheirschoolworkaswellaspeersrelationship.,Howtowriteatopicsentence?,b.是否该建此墙?(欧阳泳仪)AsIseeit,thestresswallshouldbebuiltforthefollowingreasons.C.理想的大学生活(2008广东高考)Ihopetohaveahappyandcolorfullifeinthecolleg
5、e.,1)直接回答要点,Practice1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法(2010广东高考)2).你赞同熬夜的做法吗?请简述原因。,1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学校的看法(2010广东高考)Whenitcomestothewaytoencouragechildrentostudybygivingmoney,Idontagreewithit.,2)你赞同熬夜的做法吗?请简述原因。(为什么)Idontsupportstayinguplateforthefollowingreasons.Iamstronglyagainststayinguplatebecauseitdoesgreatharmtoour
6、health.Atpresentitsauniversalphenomenonthatmanystudentsstayuplateatnight.Myattitudetowardthisisnegativeandthereasonsforthisarenotfartoseek.,2)重述要点a.学生压力的来源(刘婉钗)Nowadays,manystudentsarelivingunderstress.b.其它减压方法(郑碧君)Besides,therearemanyotherwaystoreleaseourstress.c.中学生活与大学生活的差别(2008广东高考)(何婷婷)Inmyopin
7、ion,collegelifewillbequitedifferentfromthatinhighschool.,Howtowriteatopicsentence?,Practice1).请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊2).谈谈独立的重要性。3).我们该如何践行低碳生活?,1)请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊。E-bookshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.E-bookshavemoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.IthinktheadvantagesofE-booksoutweightheirdis
8、advantages.AlthoughE-bookshavemanyadvantages,theyarenotwithout(不无)theirdisadvantages.,2).谈谈独立的重要性。(Inspiredbythestory,)Isuddenlyrealizedtheimportanceofindependence./Nobodywilldenythatindependenceplaysaveryimportantpartinourlife.3).我们该如何践行低碳生活?Asastudent,wecandomanythingsinourcampustolivealow-carbonl
9、ife./Inordertolivealow-carbonlife,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.Whatshouldwedotolivealow-carbonlifeasstudents?Ithinktheanswersareasfollows.,(说明必要、重要或意义),(怎么做),Writeoutthefollowingsentences(asmanyasyoucan),Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significanceTopicsentencestoshowwhattodoTopicsentencestosh
10、owreasons,Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significance:,Sth.isnecessary/important/significanttosb.Itis.necessary/important/significant/forsb.todosth.Sth.playsaveryimportantpart/roleinThesignificanceofcannotbeovervalued.,Sometopicsentencestoshowwhattodo,WeshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoSomemea
11、suresmustbetakentopreventthisfromhappening.Itstimeforthegovernmenttodosomethingtoimprovethecondition.Wecansolvetheproblembythefollowingmethods.,Sometopicsentencestoshowreasons,Therearemanyreasonsforthis.WehavegoodreasonstobelievethatThereasonswhyarenotfartoseek.becausetheadvantagesareenormousforever
12、yoneconcerned.Manyreasonsaccountfor,Howtowritesupportingsentences,1)解释原因是否该建此墙?Inmyopinion,thepracticeofbuildingastresswall,whichthestudentscanhit,isnotappropriate.Thismayleadstudentstosolveaproblemwithviolenceordevelopabadtemper.,2)逐条列举你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施?(主题)Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasu
13、resshouldbetaken.(列举)Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudentsdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.,3)举例说明督促学生认真学习的其他办法(2011佛山一模)Thereareotherwaystomakestudentsworkhard.Forexample,teacherscanrewarduswithsmallgiftsifwedoag
14、oodjob.Besides,studentscanbedividedintogroupstocompetewitheachothersothatwewillworkharder.,Skills:运用罗列要点或举例的方法从不同方面展开;要点一般为2-3个;注意衔接,恰当使用连接词。,Howtowritethesupportingsentences?,Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudent
15、sdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.,Agoodparagraphusuallyinclude:thetopicsentence(主题句)supportingsentences(说明或支持主题句的拓展句)thecoherence(连贯),Summary,Someconnectivewords,1)first,second,third,last2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3)tostartwithtobeginw
16、ith,next,then,furthermore,finally4)firstofall,besides,inaddition,whatsmore,lastbutnotleast5)ontheonehand,ontheotherhand(适用于相对立的两点的情况)6)foronething,foranotherthing(适用于两点的情况),Practicemakesperfect!,Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala(考拉)attheFeatherdalewildlifeparkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwalkingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.Thatsright-sleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfa