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1、2012广州一模 基础写作必用句型 doasurveyonsthamongsbcarryoutasurveyaboutsthamongsbsurveysbonsth whether how 句子 1他们将就人们过去20年的生活如何改变做一个调查 2上周我们在2600个学生中对 whoisyouridol 做了一个调查3近来我在我的同学中做了一个有关他们对新的英语教科书看法的调查4近来我在高三学生中做了一个有关体育锻炼的调查 10 ofthe IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook RecentlyI
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7、tudentsexpressedthehopethatnextyeartheywillhavelesshomeworkandmorefreetime 你参加学校的研究学习小组并对高三学生的体育运动的状况进行研究 最近你对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查 写作内容 请根据下列图例 用英语写一篇报告 并陈述你的观点 写作辅导 1 写作有可能用到的主要短语和单词 设施facility 提供资金的援助offersomefinancialaid 体育活动physicalactivities 体育训练physicaltraining 健康状况差beinpoorhealth 2 本文因为是对高三学生的体育活
8、动现状进行了调查 属于普遍性问题 故应该使用一般现在时作为主流时态 RecentlyImadeasurveyamongsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining Only35 ofthesurveyedstudentsdosports Thereasonsareasfollows halfofthestudentshavingtoomuchhomeworkandnotenoughtimetodoexercise 30 ofthemcomplainingaboutnoplaceswheretheycanrelaxthemselvesandnotenoughtraining
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10、organizationsaswellcouldoffersomefinancialaid 基础写作 共1小题 满分15分 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查 survey 以下是调查数据 偶像 idol 女生男生伟人18 18 父母25 11 影视明星50 14 体育明星6 48 没有偶像 1 9 写作内容 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由 Lastweek wedidasurveyamong
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12、onismyidol becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife 你们班同学上周五就 应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友 的话题展开了讨论 下面是讨论记录 你的看法 AsfarasIamconcerned itisbetterforustomakepresentsbyourselvesbecauseThereceivercansenseourloveandbestwishestothemingiftsmadebyus957 LastFriday ourclassmadeadiscussionaboutwhatshouldbepresentsforfr
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