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1、基础写作训练 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Shooting originatedasameansofsurvival developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury Thesport whichfirstappearedin1896 waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic However notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooti
2、ng Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today 广东08高考基础写作范文 句子表达有何亮点 写作中常见的错误 1 只有从句 没有主句 Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm 2 以逗号代替句号 把两个简单句当成一个句子 Theoldmanthoughtofhisson tearscamedownfromhi
3、sface Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings itismadeofglass 3 刻意使用从句 表达不自然 ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday 4 过多地使用并列句组合信息 Weweredrivingoutintothecountry andwesawourEnglishte
4、acherridinginabus andthebuswascrowded Itisabeautifulday andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry wesawourEnglishteacherridinginacrowdedbus 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Kateisanewstudent Shecomesfromanorthernprovince Shespeaksadialect
5、 Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect Kate anewstudentfromanorthernprovince speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand 用一句话表达 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 第一步 拆分成几个简单句 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语 这会影响汉语学习 第二步 分别翻译这几个简单句 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglis
6、handChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 第三步 合并句子 ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudyb
7、ecausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 第三步 合并句子 IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudybecausenotever
8、yoneisgoodatlearningEnglish 方法2 学会使用复合句和非谓语动词 你来试试 参考词汇 错别字 wrongly writtencharacters网络语言 weblanguage 要求 1 用两句话表达表格内容2 两句话要有连贯性 第一句 两个信息点 1 学生作文中出现很多错别字2 他们 上网聊天时经常使用网络语言 Therearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents compositions Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents composit
9、ionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline 合并句子 Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline 1 Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 第二句 1 每天有很多作业做2 没有记住生字 Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday 2 Withsomuchhomeworktodo theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 3 Because
10、theyhavesomuchhomeworktodo theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 合并句子 Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline Moreover theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharact
11、ers 连接两句话 一个乞丐在路边讨钱 askformoney 李先生匆忙赶路上班 没有注意到那个乞丐 乞丐很生气 伸出 stickout 拐杖 差点把李先生绊倒了 tripover 李先生意识到他是个残疾人 便在口袋里找钱给他 李先生拿出了一张百元钞票 a100 yuannote 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中 乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票 李先生站在那里 惊得合不拢嘴 实战演练 以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求 经过观察 整理排列成的五个信息块 请分别用一个句子表达出来 并组成一篇连贯性的短文 Abeggar Exchangeanddiscussyourpartner scomposition t
12、hengiveeachotherascoreaccordingtothefollowingcriteria Pairwork AbeggarOneday whenMr Lihurriedonhiswaytowork abeggarontheroadsidewasaskingformoney butMr Lipaidnoattentiontohim Asaresult thebeggargotangryandstuckouthiswalkingstick whichalmosttrippedMr Liover Realizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson Mr Libegantosearchforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim Hetookouta100 yuannote whichwassuddenlyblownintotheairbythewind Seeingthis thebeggarjumpedquicklytorunafterthenote whichmadeMr Lisosurprisedthathestoodtherewithhismouthopen Homework Rewritethecompositionandhanditin
