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13、tanceis Thelistofsuchexamplesisnumerous Theaboveinstancesdriveustoanaturalconclusionthat Toillustrate AsanotherinstanceIfonemoreexampleisneeded Icouldmention GiventheexamplesIjustoutlined Icanonlysaythat 4 SomeproblemsonusingExemplificationA UsingimproperexamplePopulationcontrolisafundamentalpolicyi
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15、halfofChinafromsouthtonorth IfoundthatIcannotseeaclearriverorlake WhenIlookedupinthesky Ifounditscolorwasnotblueatall itisgray Wehavelostthebeautifulglobeforever Ithought SoIthinkwehavetotakesomemeasurestofightpollution ClassWork Developthefollowingtopicsentenceintoaparagraph byusinglistingorexempli
16、fication Thereareanumberofwaysforustokeepfit Sample Thereareanumberofwaysforustokeepfit First nomatterhowbusyweare weshouldhaveexerciseeverydaytostrengthenourmuscles Second itisimportanttokeepgoodhours Forexample ifweareinthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly wecanavoidoverworkingourselvesandgetenoughsleep Finally entertainmentisalsonecessarysothatwemayhavesomemomentsofrelaxation Ifwefollowthoseinstructions wewillcertainlybeingoodhealth Follow upExercisesonpage50 53
