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1、2017-2019山东中考英语满分作文解析2019年真题在线 文段表达Write a review（评论） of the following story in about 120 words The review has to include the following points（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）（1）The title of your review（你撰写的评论的标题）（2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story（你归
2、纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因）（3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life（归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明）（4）Your conclusion about happiness（关于幸福的结论）（5）The words you may use（你可能用到的词） be satisfied with（对满意） desire n欲望 contentment 知足 the key（关键） to happinessA long time ago， in a rich an
3、d beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king He slept badly and didnt feel like eating He often cried for no reason This made the queen and his people worried So they called a doctor to examine himBut he found nothing wrong with his bodyHe said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy perso
4、n to wearThat would make him happyThe prime minister was called to the palace But when they explained the kings situation to him， he said，Although I have a lot of power， it doesnt make me happy Im always worried about losing my powerThen the kings banker came to say， Im afraid Im not happy either I
5、have a lot of wealth， but Im always worried about losing moneySomeone tries to steal my money Next， the palace singer was called to say， Im famous but Im not happy because Im worried about being followed by others I cant be freeFinally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man He searc
6、hed and searched but couldnt find anyone Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy Just as he wanted to give up he saw a poor man on the street He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself The general went to him and said，What makes you so happy？You have n
7、o power， money， or fame The man said，I have everything I want and I dont want what I cant have So Im happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， said the generalWhat shirt？I don t have any shirtsanswered the man_考题解析2019年山东枣庄中考英语作文要求根据题目中的小故事写一篇评
8、论，话题涉及现代人们对幸福的理解，体现了关注学生的成长，教育学生树立正确的价值观，符合社会主义价值观的要求，属于当今社会的热点话题之一。本文要求根据小故事写出评论，要求学生能够发表自己的观点，难度要求较高。学生在写作时要阅读所给材料。满分范文My Thoughts about HappinessPower, wealth, and fame cant always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poo
9、r people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother w
10、hen I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.All in all, dont think about what you cant have. Contentment is the key to happiness.【名师点评】这是一篇要求写评论的文章，根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约120词的评论。所提供的材料中列举了撰写的评论的标题。主要从：（1）归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因
11、。（2）归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明；（3）关于幸福的结论。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，紧扣主题，根据事实写出自己感受灵活运用平时学习的句子和句型，写出了自己对幸福的理解。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。其次本文运用了一些亮点
12、句型，为文章提分不少。（1）高分句型一 For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快乐，因为他们害怕失去钱，而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引导的原因状语从句。（2）高分句型二
13、 All in all, dont think about what you cant have. 总之，不要想你不能拥有的东西。句子what you cant have.作think about的宾语。22018年真题在线 文段表达Use the following information to write a paragraph about bees.Be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honeyThey have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect
14、 themselves.Wise and busyNo gainsDoes its own workDriven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comesJoin together to build cells of wax（蜡质房子） for their honeyHow busy they are alwaysDont workThat have six sides and are all of one shape and sizeA house called a hiveOne queenBees live in They are There is in each hive. They all Each bee They build cells Its pleasant to see But drones They are Children shouldnt touch bees No pains Shouldnt children_考题解析2018年山东枣庄中考英语作文要求学生介绍蜜蜂。文体为说明文。今年作文的主题从以往的关注人文
