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2、iterthoughtitwastimetoindentagain Agoodwriterisalwaysabletogiveaspecificreasonforeachparagraphinhiswriting Unity Toooftenawriteristemptedtogatherrandomthoughtsintoseveralsentences indentthem andcallthemaparagraph Lookatthefollowingexample Itbeginsnowhereandgoesnowhere Ithasnopurpose Hereishowthepara
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8、unifiedbecauseeachofthefivesupportingsentencescanbedirectlylinkedwiththecontrollingidea Unity Theunityofparagraphwouldbedestroyedbyinsertinganysentencethatisnotrelatedtothekeyword s inthetopicsentence Thisiswhywritingatopicsentenceisagoodidea Onceyouhavewrittendownthemainidea youcanbecertainthatever
9、yothersentencesupports developsorexplainsthatidea Thecontrollingideaisusuallyindicatedbyasinglewordoraphraseinthetopicsentence whichisknownasthekeyword s Inthesampleparagraph thekeywordisconfident Alldetailsarepresentedtosupport develop andexplainthestudent sconfidence Unity ExercisesIdentifyandunde
10、rlinethetopicsentencesoftheparagraphbelow Anelectroniccomputercangatherawiderangeofinformationformanypurpose onceitisgivenaprogram Forthescientistitcangetinformationfromouterspaceorfromthedepthoftheocean Inbusinessandindustrythecomputerpreparesfactoryinventories keepstrackofsalestrendsandproductionn
11、eeds mailsdividendchecks andmakesoutcompanypayrolls Itcankeepbankaccountsuptodateandmakeoutelectricbills Ifyouareplanningatripbyplane thecomputerwillfindoutwhatrouttotakeandwhatspaceisavailable Unity ExerciseAnalyzeandmakecommentsonthestructureofthefollowingparagraph oryouanswerthefollowingthreeques
12、tions A Isthereanytopicsentenceintheparagraph B Whichwordisthekeywordcontainedintopicsentence C Isthisparagraphunified Unity WhalesWhalesareamongthemostintelligentmammalsevertoinhabittheearth Scientistsstudyingwhalesratetheirintelligenceonalevelwithhigherprimatesbecauseoftheircomplexgroupbehavior Fo
13、rexample theseimpressivemammalshavebeenseenteachinganddiscipliningtheiryoung helpingwoundedfellowwhales andplayingindefinitegamelikepatterns Whalescontinuallyneedtosearchforfoodinordertosurvive Asfishpopulationdecreasesbecauseofoverfishing thewhale squestforfoodbecamemoredifficult unity Thisparagrap
14、hisnotunifiedbecauseitbeginswithwhaleintelligenceanddraftsintofoodproblems Whenyouwriteaparagraph youshouldstayonthetracksetbyyourtopicsentence Acoherentandunifiedparagraphshouldbewrittenasfollows Unity Whalesareamongthemostintelligentcreaturesevertoinhabittheearth Scientistsstudyingwhalesratetheiri
15、ntelligenceonalevelwithhigherprimatesbecauseoftheircomplexgroupbehavior Forexample thesehugeandimpressivemammalshavebeenseenteachinganddiscipliningtheiryoung helpingwoundedfellowwhalesandplayingindefinitegamelikepatterns Theyareabletocoordinatecomplexgroupactivitiesbecauseoftheirapparentlyeffectivec
16、ommunicationssystemofsonarclicksandpings Allinall scientificevidenceshowsthatwhaleshaveahighorderofsocialorganization Transitionalwords Oncetheparagraphhasstatedthecentral controllingidea thesupportingsentencesinthewritingmustbelinkedtogethersothatthereadercanconnecteachideatotheprecedingonewithease Thewriterusestransitionalwordsorphrasestomaketheseconnectionintheparagraphclearlyandsmoothly Rememberthattransitionalhelptoformbridgesfromoneideatoanotherandfromoneparagraphtoanother Thereadercrosses
