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1、写作对策 考核目标 1 能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子 2 能根据题意连贯 贴切地进行书面表达 篇章写作要求 统一性 unity 围绕主题 连贯性 coherence 逻辑性 过渡词 一致性 consistency 时态 人称 英语作文要求 内容 观点明确 内容充实 理由充分 10 语言 表达正确 语言流畅 用词恰当 10 句式多样化 组织结构 结构正确 上下文连贯一致5 写作步骤 1 写前准备 看清题意 理清思路 写什么 2 写作过程 提纲 outline 动笔 writing 检查 check 正确连接分句1 Thebookwasinteresting Ireaditrapidly
2、 Thebookwasinteresting andIreaditrapidly 2 Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs theboysmoppedthefloor Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs andtheboysmoppedthefloor 避免误置修饰语3 AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix 4 Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject Igotgoodmarksin
3、almosteverysubject 注意逻辑主语5 Tobewell informed readingnewspaperisagoodhabit Tobewell informed weshouldreadnewspapereveryday 6 Comingoutoftheclassroom myheartwasbeatingveryfast Comingoutoftheclassroom Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast 避免指代不清7 Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn tinvitedtotheparty Sheaskedwhyhersiste
4、rwasn tinvitedtotheparty Sheaskedhersister Whywasn tIinvitedtotheparty 避免人称代词混淆8 Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong 避免重复9 Inmyopinion Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice Inmyopinion weshouldask
5、themforadvice Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice 尽量避免汉语干扰10 Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger 11 DuringstayinginBeijing Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest DuringmystayinBeijing I WhilestayinginBeijing I 12 Ther
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7、e 注意时态一致15 Iwentshoppingyesterday Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired 注意时态一致Iwentshoppingyesterday Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded WhenIfinishedmyshopping Iwassotired Writeashortparagraphabout LackofsleepWearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime Everyeveningweworktillverylate Wedon thaveenoughtimeforsleep I mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth