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1、名师整理 助你成功 读后续写深度解读 真题剖析 模拟训练 1 评分标准 阅卷时主要考虑以下内容 1 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度 2 内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况 3 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性 4 上下文的连贯性 2 续写步骤 1 精读文章 确定文章线索 每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路 通过精读文章 找到 该篇文章的写作线索 比如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等 这样有利于考生 顺藤摸 瓜 2 仔细审题 明确续写要求 一般短文后面的 注意 都有对此短文续写的具体要求 如字数限制 使用几处下划线关键词语 续写段落的首句提示 这样考生能做到 心中有数 3 回扣原文 揣摩续写
2、思路 根据文章后面的要求 再次快速回读短文 抓住文章的思 路 结合段首的提示语 最终确定续写段落的思路 同时结合文章划线词语提示 确定续写 段落的内容 4 拟写草稿 修改错词病句 在确定了思路和内容之后 最关键的就是结合提示语或者 文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿 拟写时 注意句子结构的多样性 语言的丰富性 并通过句 与句之间连接词的正确使用 使上下文连贯 5 标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语 这一点可以帮助考生检查 关键词语的使用情况并根据情况做出修改 最后在誊写文字时 务必做到 字迹工整 清晰 3 真题解读 2018 年 6 月浙江高考真题 阅读下面短文 根据所给情节进行续写
3、使之构成一个完整的故事 It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West We took a plane to Albuquerque a big city in the state of New Mexico We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon Uncle Paul my dad s friend picked us up from the
4、airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby Very early in the morning Uncle Paul woke u
5、s up to have breakfast The day starts at dawn on my farm he said After breakfast I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze 吃草 I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses They looked really cool In the afternoon I asked
6、Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride and he said yes as long as my dad went with me I wasn t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway So my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats got on our horses and headed slowly towards the mountains Don t 名师整理 助你成功 be late for supper Uncle Paul cried and kee
7、p to the track so that you don t get lost OK my dad cried back After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks the deep green pine trees and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene It looked like a beautiful wo
8、ven 编织的 blanket spread out upon the ground just for us 注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右 2 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 4 续写思路 和以往的高考英语命题
9、作文不同 读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息 不仅要读懂字面 含义 还要厘清文章的脉络和关系 续写这篇短文时 考生需要明白故事的发展进程 前因 后果 地理位置变化 人物情感等 在此基础上 考生顺着文章的思路 根据线索 发挥想 象 对其后的情节进行合理预测 并用英语表达出来 同时 在组织语言时 切记使用5 个以上给出的提示词 5 续写分析 已知线索 去西部荒野 体验农场生活 骑马去森林 父亲带作者去 西部荒野 喂鸡牧羊 体验农场生活 见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒 作 者心生向往 于是亲身上马体验 和父亲一同骑马走向森林 可续写线索 迷路 找到回农场的方法 回到农场 1 第一段所给首句 Suddenl
10、y a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse 这一句是故事发 展的转折点 可从兔子出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去 可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去 也可 以写因追赶兔子而迷路 无论从何角度拓展 需注意与续写第二段首句呼应 2 第二段所给首句 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 这一句呼应前 文 Uncle Paul 的嘱托 不要误了晚饭 不要迷路 可以从如何寻路返回入手去写续文 前 文提示农场附近有河流 并且river 为标有下划线的关键词语 所以可以从沿着河流回到农 场的角度拓展
11、 6 续写词汇 已给提示词汇 dad Uncle Paul farm house river feed sheep late track get lost sight 名师整理 助你成功 话题激活词汇 情感 panic relief nervous worried 动作 run cry think to oneself 环境 scenery mountain range valley river lake forest sun set wind blow One possible version Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out i
12、n front of my horse Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it After a while we were completely lost in the forest There was nothing left in our sight but the trees We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper I thought to myself After a series of fruitless
13、 attempts to find a way out we felt hungry and tired Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark We got stuck in the forest And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain I was almost on
14、 the edge of breaking down when my father said Don t worry my son I remember there is a river near the farm house Find the river and we will be back home Finally we found the river and got back to the house along it Needless to say we ate a late dinner 7 模拟训练 阅读下面短文 根据所给情节进行续写 使之构成一个完整的故事 Steve was
15、the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis and he was my cousin By the age of 19 Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota I wanted to be exactly like him So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota I was excited After planning the tr
16、ip we gathered clothes and supplies and began our great adventure We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening On our way to the campsite Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains saying that it was the ranger station 护林站 where the forester worked Finally after a long walk we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper After we gathered enough wood from the for
