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1、名师整理 助你成功 二轮专题练 五 改错专项 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共 有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10 处 多者 从第11 处起 不计分 A How does the disease present Well from what is known so far there can be the num
2、ber of symptoms range from mild to severe There can be fever and respiratory symptoms such as cough and short of breath In mor e severe case there s been pneumonia 肺炎 kidney failure 肾衰竭 and death The mortality rate 死亡率 was not known yet How can we tell if someone is infected or not The infection can
3、 be diagnosed 诊断 by a test calling PCR or Polymerase Chain Reaction 聚合酶链反应 This test identifies the virus basing on its genetic fingerprint There is current no specific medication for the virus and treatment is supportive care There s no vaccine 疫苗 to protect the virus Treatment and vaccines are in
4、development B Sticking to a vegan diet might sound difficult especial with many popular dishes containing meat or other animal products Yet in recent years veganism has become one of the fastest growing lifestyle trend in the world According to Huff Post more than 3 million people in the United Stat
5、es are vegans In the UK about 542 000 people choose veganism over the past decade What is driving this growth in veganism One reason may be that people want to protect the environment Produce meat and dairy products is known to be stressful for the environment According to a 2013 study by the UN Foo
6、d and Agriculture Organization global meat manufacturing causes about 18 percent of the world s greenhouse gas emissions This figure is 名师整理 助你成功 high than all the world s cars trains and planes combined According to BBC News another reason is why many of today s young people believe it s wrong to k
7、ill animals for food For many people veganism simply means eating no meat cheese or eggs and going animal free also applies to fashion and manufacturing For example leather is used to make shoes and clothing Every year more than a billion animals from cows to snakes killed to make leather products f
8、rom their skins Now many brands are looking other materials So if you re interested in protecting animals and to saving the environment you might want to give veganism a try C When I was young I didn t know what friendship When I stayed with my friends a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my h
9、eart Now I have grown up and got many friend And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship When I am happy they are also happy and shared the happiness with me When I make progress they will be very exciting Instead when I m in a di fficult situation they will offer help to me So friends
10、hip is never an one way ticket If we want to get them we must treat others well at first We should always be ready to help others especially that they are in difficult situations D I can t swim because I have a strong fear of water Look back my childhood experiences I think that three reasons might
11、explain the fear The first reason is that I was not allow to go near the water when I was a child for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it So even as a child that I was taught to see the water as something danger Second my eyes became bad when I was five If I took off my glass in the water I coul
12、dn t see anything or this increased my fear The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw a neighbor drowning After then I have been more frightened E Get a good education is more important today than ever before In Canada mostly children attend public schools Public schools are mainly fo
13、und by governments through tax income Students in Canada taught in English and in French The rest of Canadian children attend private 名师整理 助你成功 schools that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents In law the children must attend the school from 5 to 16 There is several different levels in the
14、 Canadian education system The first was called Elementary Schools which include kindergartens through grade 7 or 8 F A few months after returning the US from Germany I took part at a college course in French Since I can speak German well in Germany I thought that it might be interested to begin stu
15、dying another language In the first class the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise in which he would say one word or two in French and each student would do their best to copy When he got to me he kept having me to say more words and I finally asked him what I find it great funs It s the
16、first time I ve heard an American speak French with a German accent he explained it G Dear Linda I am very sorry to hear that you are bad ill in hospital Are you getting better now Please don t worry about my illness All you should do now is to have good rest and follow the doctor s advices At present we are learning some new lessons They aren t very difficult but you don t need to worry about your study When you got back to school we are all willingly to help you with those missing lessons at t
