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1、页 1 专项突破 高考英语 短文改错集训 一 专项突破 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同学写的以下作文 文中共有10 处语言 错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10 处 多者 从第11 处起 不计分 Passage 1 Last Sunday it was my father s funny day After supper my father we
2、nt to see the film But in our surprise he came back just about half an hour later I asked him what was the matter He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers Surprising they looked at thei
3、r ticket carefully only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different So they looked at the tickets carefully After a while my father apologized to the woman saying Sorry I make a mistake Take this seat please The fact was that his ticket found out under the
4、glass on his desk was for the film a month ago Passage 2 It was my first Mid Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12 In the early morning my parents and I went to the park at their car There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window We waited a long time and buy three
5、 tickets In the Tiger Mountain of the park I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd Unfortunately I got separated from my parents I had hard time looking for him but I had no luck Wandering in the park I felt alone without any companions Worse
6、still I had no money so I had to walk home covered as much as 5 kilometers Passage 3 September 15 2013 Fine One week ago we finished our mid exams Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot I was in greatly pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing has happened unti
7、l the class was over Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom I still didn t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my 页 2 classmates As result the hurt in my foot became bad Now I know I m wrong We can tell others our need for help and accept his help Some day we can not help ot
8、hers in return In this way we can get along to each other happily and peacefully Passage 4 Patience is of great importance in our daily life Once I waited a bus to come at a stop 30 minutes past but no bus came Both upset and annoyed I decided to walk on feet But no sooner had I left when the bus ar
9、rived I thought if I had waited for one more minute I would have caught it If I chose to take a next bus I would have to wait for other 30 minutes Only then do I realize my problem Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in Now whenever I am close to lose my patience I
10、 ll think of this experience Passage 5 How harmful cigarettes are getting now My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27 2009 Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer She knows smoking was harmful so she just couldn t quit She always hid her addiction hop
11、ed that I would never start smoking My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live so that I don t have to go through which she did Passage 6 Today
12、 it was a sunny day In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me I began to walk home with bag in my hand On the way I met my next door neighbor Miss Wang that was walking her dog We greeted with each other and beg
13、in to talk about the weather As we were talking his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell As a result some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it Five minutes late I was back at the store to buy bread again Passage 7 An most interesting t
14、hing happened to me last winter During my winter vocation I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma One Friday afternoon I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend Upon receive
15、 the phone Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away Under my help she successfully called her good friend That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor tha
16、t she could make calls 页 3 with the new phone I bought her They all praised what thoughtful I was 高考英语 短文改错集训 一 答案与解析 Passage 1 本文是一篇记述了作者与父亲周末看电影时所发生的一件小趣事 1 the a 考查冠词的用法 文中 my father went to see the film 提到的 看电影 用英语表示时 应用 see a film 或 go to the cinema 除此 英语中类似的说法还有 see a doctor see a play等等 2 in to 考查介词搭配的用法 句子 But in our surprise he came back just about 中的介词短语应是to one s surprise 意为 使某人惊讶得是 除此 英语中类似的表述还有 to one s delight to one s joy等等 3 what that 考查定语从句的用法 文中 told us about the funny thing wh
