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1、Unit 11 How was your school trip写作指导【写作任务】假如今天是星期六(May 20th)，你参观了机器人博物馆。请你写一篇不少于60词的英语日记，记录你此次参观的情况。【任务分析】1.该写作任务要求写一篇英语日记，首先要注意格式正确。2.文章的主体可以包括两方面的内容：在机器人博物馆的见闻及自己的感受。3.该写作任务要描述的是自己过去的一次经历，因此人称应用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。【学生习作】Saturday May 20th SunnyToday I went to the robot museum with my three friends. The
2、 museum was big and clean. There were different kinds of robots on show. Some of them could speak like people, some could help clean the house, and some could play chess. The guide told us some interesting stories about robots. We all want to have our own robots one day. We enjoyed the trip very muc
3、h.【习作点评】1.该习作格式正确，语言流畅，对自己在机器人博物馆的所见所闻进行了简单明了的介绍。2.作者如果能在文中多运用一些形容词，那么自己参观机器人博物馆时的感受就能表现得更生动、更具体。【习作改进】Saturday May 20th SunnyToday I went to the robot museum with my three friends.It was an exciting trip. The museum was big and clean. There were different kinds of robots on show. Some of them could speak like people, some could help clean the house, and some could play chess.They were really cool and smart.The guide was great, too.Shetold us some interesting stories about robots. We all want to have our own robots one day. We enjoyed the trip very much.
