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16、drespondedquietly MarkwaskilledinVietnam hesaid Thefuneralistomorrow andhisparentswouldlikeitifyoucouldattend Ihadneverseenaservicemaninamilitarycoffinbefore sohandsome somature ANoteoftheNicestThings Mark sparentsinvitedtothefuneral IattendedMark sfuneral 3 Cluestowriting PARTTHREE Afterthefuneral Mark smotherandfatherfoundme WhydidMark sparentsinvitemetoattendthefuneral WhydidMark sparentsfindmeafterthefuneral Whatwouldtheysayordo ANoteoftheNicestThings Mark sclassmatesstartedtogatheraroundus
