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1、Youarewhatyouwrite 托福写作很重要 语法词汇不可少 多练多看多比较 表达句式用得巧 有理有利还有节 满分一定能拿到 课程设置 托福写作介绍独立写作 语言修饰 综合写作 题目串讲 写作是表达 而不是翻译 美中不足 AmericanChinanofoot Aflyintheointment心花怒放 Heartflowerangryopen bewildwithjoy 红颜知己 Redfaceknowme Female MaleIntimate人山人海peoplemountainpeopleseahugecrowdsofpeople 马马虎虎Horsehorsetigertiger
2、Fairtomiddling不三不四Nothreenofourneitherfishnorfowl 我们为什么考托福 试试看 出国留学可以学习知识 增强阅历 为未来打下基础 Bystudyingabroad weaccumulateknowledge gainnewexperienceandprepareourselvesforthefuture Studyingabroadhelpsusaccumulateknowledge gainnewexperiencesandprepareourselvesforthefuture Ourknowledgeandexperiencesforfutur
3、edevelopmentscanbeaccumulatedbystudyingabroad Studyingabroad wecangainknowledge experiences andskillsforfuturedevelopments Bringingnewknowledgeandmoreexperiences studyingabroadisbeneficialforourfuturedevelopments 句子三种训练方法 多种方法表达同一句意 扩充丰富已有句型 对句式进行各种变换 再试试 我认为 我同意这个观点 勤奋才能成功 Iagreewiththeidea Iwillsu
4、cceedifIworkhard 用高级词汇替换低级词汇 Isupporttheannouncement IwillsucceedifIsparenoeffortforworking 添加副词和形容词 Istronglysupporttheclassicalannouncement IwilldefinitelysucceedifIsparenoeffortforworking 找出潜在的逻辑关系 Accordingtomypersonalexperienceandeducation Istronglysupporttheclassicalannouncement finalsuccessre
5、sultsfromhard work Basedonmypersonalexperienceandeducationalbackground Istronglysupporttheclassicalsaying finalsuccesscomesfromcontinualhard work Iagreewiththeidea IwillsucceedifIworkhard Basedonmypersonalexperienceandeducationalbackground Istronglysupporttheclassicalsaying finalsuccesscomesfromcont
6、inualhard working 如果既不了解敌人 又不了解自己 你就完蛋了 Ifyouknowneitheryourselfnoryourenemy youwillalwaysendangeryourself Ifyouknowneithervocabularynorgrammar youwillalwaysendangeryourself 你了解自己吗 Peopleworkinginbigcompanyaresupposedtousecomputer Thereisanevidencethatadvertisingprofoundlyaffectshumanbeingtheworldov
7、er Thepersonwithbroadandprofoundknowledgecanhaveabetterlifethanthepersonwhodoesnot Themanbittenbythehomelessdoghasdied ThemajorityofChinesearefondofwatchingtelevision Alargeamountofpeoplegoabroadtolearnknowledge Judgmentsmadeinmostofthebookarebelievable Dinosaurshaveextincted 拼写重要吗 pattimepronouncat
8、ionchangeablewrittingtruelysuceedninteenthmaintenance 一 托福写作介绍 分值换算表 PercentileRank IntegratedwritingReading 3mins 200 300wordsListening 2mins 200 300wordsWriting 20mins 150 225wordsIndependentWritingWriting 30mins 300 400words ETS会做的是 数字数数每段句子数 每个句子的平均字数单词的字母数逻辑衔接词的使用数量是人数的 写作须知 不要写标题禁止使用启示语气写作格式 缩
9、行式 首句空4到6个字母 空行式 段与段之间空一行 标点符号后面要空格句子首字母要大写 专有名词首字母大写I China Japanese 日语 ShanyuanStreet ThePulitzerPrize 英式英语还是美式英语 colo u r program me labo u r书面语还是口语 当然是书面语BTW Udunno 4u2Bornot2B that sa 推荐书目 TPOOG Delta sKey Kaplan Barron Princeton词汇 俞敏洪 TOEFL词汇 词根 联想记忆法 张洪伟 戴云 托福10000词 语法 戴云 托福语法满分精要 张道真 实用英语语法
10、推荐网站 托福机经网小马过河太傻 寄托天下新东方批改网 二 独立写作 5分标准 EffectivelyaddressesthetopicandtaskWellorganizedandwelldevelopedAppropriateexplanations exemplificationsanddetailsUnity progressionandcoherenceDisplaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage demonstratingsyntacticvariety appropriatewordchoiceandidiomaticity Minor
11、lexicalorgrammaticalerrors 4分标准 butmaycontainoccasionalredundancy orlackofclarity digression orunclearconnectionsandcontainssentencevarietyandarangeofvocabulary butmayhaveoccasionalnoticeableminorlanguageerrorsthatdonotinterferewithmeaning 3分标准 butconnectionsamongideasmaybeoccasionallyobscured uncle
12、ar orinconsistentinusinglanguageeffectively witherrorsingrammarandvocabularythatoccasionallyobscuremeaningbutlimitedrangeofsyntacticstructuresandvocabulary 官方指南 的话 考生是否赞同某一观点并不重要 评分人员经过培训可以接受所有不同类型的观点重要的是考生在议论中具备的能力 直接切入问题的能力 明确提出主张的能力 以及写出 结构严谨 例证恰当 句子多样化且 结构正确文章的能力 独立写作圣经1 第一要义 观点要表达清楚不基于考生的真实身份 可
13、以造假只考语言水平 不侧重思想水平不测试考生的真实想法写作基于表达 不基于翻译 独立写作圣经2 不同于平时的写作内容 语言同等重要 不要过分追求语言观点的层次比观点的数量更重要逻辑错误比语言错误重要跑题你就完蛋了 关于字数 通常 一篇作文大约需要300词 少于300词的作文也能获得高分 但是经验表明 较短的作文无法对一些论点展开讨论 而要获得5分的成绩 对论点的讨论是必须的 比字数更重要的 作文数字没有上限 但是不要为写而写 应针对话题有的放矢 观点的数目固然重要 但评分人员更看重观点的质量和陈述观点的有效性 1 独立写作分类 题型分类 11 观点选择 Whichwouldyouprefer
14、2 比较对比 ratherthan as as compare3 自主定义 在一定范围内自主选择 观点选择类 Someprefertoworkforalargecompany Othersprefertoworkforasmallcompany Whichwouldyouprefer Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice Somepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown Othersprefertoliveinabigcity whichplacewouldyouprefertolivein Usespecificr
15、easonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer 比较对比类 Ithasbeensaid Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks CompareandContrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks Inyouropinion Whichsourceismoreimportant Why Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement Beingcreative ratherthanplanning
16、carefully helpspeoplecomeupwiththebestsolutiontoproblems Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement Peoplethinkitismoreenjoyabletoworkthreedaysaweekforlongtimethantoworkfivedaysaweekforshortertime Acompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearyourcommunity Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceonyourcommunity Doyousupportoropposethefactory Explainyourposition 自主定义 Youhaveaopportunitytovisitaforeigncountryfortwoweeks Whichcountrywouldyouliketovisit Usespecificreasonsa
