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1、如何用英语描述开学第一天【写作任务】今天是你进入高中的第一天，请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记，并向学校英语园地投稿。1.校园环境；2.对老师和同学们的印象；3.自己的感受。注意:1.词数100左右（格式及首句已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。September 1st, Thursday FineToday is my first day at Senior High school. _【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作体裁为日记，主要描述开学第一天的所见及所感。写作时要注意要点全面，层次清晰。本写作以陈述当天发生的事为主，故时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。二、
2、谋篇布局本写作的格式已给出，故只需写正文部分。正文部分可分为三部分：第一部分：描写校园环境；第二部分：描述你对老师和同学们的印象；第三部分：表达自己的感受。三、组织语言第一部分：描写校园环境普通表达高级表达When I went into the school, I found it so beautiful.Green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there. Our school seems like a big garden.When I went into my school, I saw a tall teach
3、ing building. On the top of it our national flag was flying.The air had the smell of flowers. It made me feel relaxed.Entering through the school gate, I was amazed at its beautiful scenery.With green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere, our school looks like a big garden.On stepping int
4、o my school, I saw a tall teaching building, on the top of which our national flag was flying.In front of it was a beautiful garden and the air was filled with the smell of flowers, which made me feel relaxed.第二部分：描述你对老师和同学们的印象普通表达高级表达All my new teachers are kind and patient.They use different teach
5、ing methods.She used a new method of teaching. I had never experienced it before.All my classmates are friendly and hard-working.I hope many of them will be my friends. / I hope to make many new friends.Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also experienced.The
6、ir teaching methods seemed new and effective.I was attracted by her new method of teaching, which I had never experienced before.All my classmates are friendly and brilliant.Im looking forward to making friends with them.第三部分：表达自己的感受普通表达高级表达I cant forget my first day at Senior High school.I think Il
7、l have happy high school days.I will make progress here.My first day at Senior High school made a deep impression on me.Im sure Ill spend my high school days happily.I believe with excellent teachers helping me, I will make great progress here.【范文展示】普通范文September 1st, Thursday FineToday is my first
8、day at Senior High school.When I went into the school, I found it so beautiful.Green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there. Our school seems like a big garden.All my new teachers are kind and patient.They use different teaching methods.At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first,
9、but I was soon relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and hard-working.I hope many of them will be my friends.I cant forget my first day at Senior High school.I think Ill have happy high school days.高级范文September 1st, Thursday
10、 FineToday is my first day at Senior High school.Entering through the school gate, I was amazed at its beautiful scenery.With green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere, our school looks like a big garden.Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also ex
11、perienced.Their teaching methods seemed new and effective.In the English class, Mr. Smith, our foreign teacher fromAmerica, told us about his interesting experiences inChina. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and brilliant.Im looking forward to making friends with them.My first day at Senior H
12、igh school made a deep impression on me.Im sure Ill spend my high school days happily.温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现相同标号的内容采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。另外，高级表达中的部分词汇虽目前尚未学到，但都属于课标词汇，学有余力的同学可以提前学习掌握。【实战演练】假设你是李华，请用英语给你的新西兰网友杰克写一封电子邮件，描述你上高中第一天的见闻及感受。注意：1.词数10
13、0左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Jack,How are you? I want to tell you something about my first day at Senior High school. _ Best wishes, Li Hua答案Dear Jack,How are you? I want to tell you something about my first day at Senior High school.On stepping into my school, I saw a tall teaching building, on the top of which our nation
