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1、作文基础过渡性训练 连贯与句式的运用 连贯 coherence 指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系 要使文章前后衔接紧密 可采用以下方法 提示1 恰当使用关联词如when so if because sothat等 提示2 巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语如First Second Third Soon What smore Asaresult等 提示3 适当使用过渡性语句Thereasonsareasfollows Everycoinhastwosides Ontheotherhand Onthecontrary 连接词 句型的选择1 递进关系 肯定 否定 2 时间一 就不
2、久然后同时 Besides What smore Also Inaddition Furthermore What sworse Evenworse Worsestill Tomakemattersworse Themoment Ondoing assoonas immediately directly Itwasnotlongbefore Afterawhile Soon Afterthat Then So Next Atthesametime Meanwhile 3 转折4 顺序5 条件6 强调 however but onthecontrary Ontheotherhand yet Fi
3、rst Second Third Last Next Then If Aslongas Solongas onconditionthat Itwas that who Soshedid Idohope Shedidhelpme Itreallyworked 7 其它不得不做某事havetodosth havenochoicebuttodosth havenothingtodobutdosth 有必要做某事Thereisnoneed forsb todosth Itisnecessary forsb todo 最好做某事You dbetterdosth It sbettertodosth 做某事
4、没困难havenodifficultyindoingsth havenotroubleindoingsth 感谢某人thanksb bethankfultosb expressone sthankstosb begratefultosb Thanksto 求助某人turntosb forhelp asksb forhelp withthehelpof withone shelp惊奇Toone ssurprise Insurprise Surprisingly only 不定式 表意外结果 原因如下 很多 Thereasonsareasfollows Therearemanyreasonsfor
5、it 浪费金钱 时间 It sawasteofmoney time 结果Asaresult Therefore Thus So总结Inaword Inshort Aboveall Afterall表达观点Inmyopinion Ithink Ibelieve I msure Iguess Task1请在下列句子中 间 填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语 XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreetheheardsomeonecryforhelp HeadvisedthatIhireacarIcouldtravelaroundinthewest Itwasnotlongthepol
6、icecame heheardthecryforhelp hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl Doyouagreewithmyarrangement dowritetomesoon Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest 7 Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends Isaved 80 Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth itmaymakeusfat What smore Besides Also Furtherm
7、ore Inaddition when sothat inorderthat before Assoonas Immediately Directly Themoment Ifnot Asaresult Therefore What sworse Evenworse Tomakemattersworse 句式的运用 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 基本句型 1 感叹句e g 1 HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter 2 Whatakindboyheis 3 Howdisappointedhewas 2 强调句e g Itwasthisyoun
8、gboythathelpedtheoldgranny 3 倒装句e g 1 Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem 2 Therecomesthepolicecar 3 Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman 句式的运用 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 基本句型 4 省略句e g Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus 5 with短语e g Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherh
9、and 6 定语从句e g Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation 7 各种名词性从句e g That swhatIshoulddo 8 各种状语从句e g Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Task2按要求改写下列句子 使其更具文采 1 Tomsavedthedrowninggirl 强调 2 IhopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear 强调 3 Tomwaspuzzled 感叹 4 Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill 感
10、叹 5 TomandMarylikesingingsongs 肯定倒装 6 Johnlikestostudyandplay 否定倒装 7 Soonthefirefighterscame 表时间句型 ItwasTomthat whosavedthedrowninggirl IdohopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear HowpuzzledTomwas Whatgreatfunitistoclimbthehill Tomlikessingingsongs sodoesMary NotonlydoesJohnliketostudy but also helikestoplay
11、Itwasnotlongbeforethefirefighterscame Task3WritingPractice请你给 中国日报 写一篇稿件 谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法 原因 1 家庭贫穷 供不起儿童上学 他们不得不在家赚钱养家 2 部分家长认为女孩上学无用 不愿让她们上学 3 部分儿童对功课不感兴趣 不愿上学 看法 1 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会 2 全社会都应重视儿童教育 他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用 要求 1 不要逐字逐句翻译 2 语句要连贯通顺 3 字数100个左右 Nowinthecountryareas therearemanychildrenoutofs
12、chool Mostfamiliesarepoorandcan taffordtheireducation Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedn tgotoschool Theydon tletthemgotoschool Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldn tliketogotoschool Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated Thewholesocietyshouldpayatte
13、ntiontoit They llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry 诊断 优点 缺点 药方 1 词能达意 2 语句表达基本正确 语句不够连贯 1 使用常见句型 2 每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词 Nowinthecountryareas therearemanychildrenoutofschool mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool theyhavenochoicebuttostayathomeandmakemoney someparentsthinkthereisnonee
14、dfortheirdaughterstogotoschool theydon tletthemgotoschool somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudies somewouldn tliketogotoschool allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit they llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountryoneday Task4Writingbyyourselves下列图画描述的
15、是两位少先队员上星期日去少年宫的途中经历的事情 请据此写一篇短文 参加由英语组组织的英语作文竞赛 练习一 一 简单句翻译 1 我们在学习怎样用电脑 We relearninghowtousethecomputer 2 他和他的朋友经常查字典 Heandhisfriendalwayslookupinthedictionary 3 请给我一杯水 好吗 Pleasegivemeacupofwater willyou 4 老师让我回答了这个问题 Theteacheraskedmetoanswerthequestion 5 我们的国家变得越来越强大 Ourcountryisgettingstronger
16、andstronger 6 你的到来使我很高兴 Yourarrivalmakesmeveryhappy 7 村庄里有许多绿树和湖泊 Therearemanygreentreesandlakesinthevillage 8 我们不应该歧视弱者 Weshouldnotlookdownupontheweak 二 并列句翻译 1 我喜欢读书 他喜欢玩玩具 while Ilikereadingwhilehelikesplayingwithtoys 2 孩子们非常高兴 或者至少看起来很高兴 or Thechildrenareveryhappyoratleasttheylookhappy 3 中国是发展中国家 而美国是发达国家 but while Chinaisadevelopingcountry whiletheUnitedStatesisadevelopedone 4 这里常下雨 有时有暴风雨 and Itoftenrainshere andstormssometimes 5 他不但受到我们的鼓励而且受到老师的表扬 notonly butalso Hewasnotonlyencouragedby
