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1、WritingTraining ProducedbyLiZhongying 假如你是李华 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育 来信询问有关情况 请你根据下表提供的信息 写封回信 谈一谈 素质教育 实施后你们学校生活发生的变化 注意 1 写信日期为2004年2月20日 2 词数 100左右 3 注意书信格式 DearAlice Yousaidthatyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutquality orientededucation SoIwilltalkaboutquality orientedandexam orientededucation At
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9、enfarintothenight Afterclass Wehavevariousoutsideactivities suchassinging dancing Englishcorner andtakingcomputerlessons Feb20 2004DearAlice Hownicetohearfromyou YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina Now Iwilltellyouaboutit Inthepast exam orientededucationforcedustolistentoourteacherwhiletaking
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15、boyinthestreet hestoppedtospeaktohimandgavehimapenny Feb20 2004DearAlice Thankyouforyourlastletter Youaskedmewhatquality orientededucationbroughttous NowI lltellyouaboutit Insteadofjustlisteningtotheteacherandtakingnotes wenowexperienceamoreactiveatmosphereinclass Weoftendoresearchtodevelopourabilit
16、yandsometimeswecanevenactasateachertoteachothers Afterclass weusedtospendallthetimetryingtofinishthehomework Butnow thereareallkindsofactivitiesforus suchassinging dancing ballgamesandcomputerstudying WeoftengototheEnglishcornertopractiseourEnglish Intheevening thehomeworkexercisesonceforcedustostudytillmidnight Yetnow wecanwatchnewsonTV doexperimentsbyourselvesandhavediscussionsofoursubjects Self improvementcomeswiththenewwayofstudy Wereallybenefitalotfromit Whataboutyourschoollife Bestwishes Y
