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1、河南省郑州市新世纪学校2012届高三英语专题总复习精选强化练习题（二百三十九）去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。我打算今后每两年回去一次。学生习作外教批改During my last winter holiday，I went to the1countryside with my father to visit my grandma with my father.2I found a_large_change great changes there.The first time I came back3 returned，
2、they are live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 other animals.Now，6 But last winter when I returned, they had a big house to birth chickens.7 They also have8 had some poles in which it has9 some fish fishponds.Every year，they sell it_and_have the fish for a lot of money.A
3、lot of villagers in my grandmas village have10 had twostoreyed houses，evidencing that their life11 lives becoming better and better12 had improved.I felt very happy.During my trip，I found they are13 all the villagers friendly and hardworking.I think these characteristics are worth of learning.At the
4、 end of my trip，I told my father that I had planned14 that I would come back planned to return every two years.He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea.,旁批1country或countryside前要加定冠词the。2注意词序。要保证你的句子不会产生歧义。原句的意思是你拜访与你父亲住在一起的祖母。3如果用come，就表示作者写此文时仍在家乡。4原句中的they are live是一个常见的错误，不符合英语的语法。这里应该用过去进行时态
5、。5你不是在说明数量，所以不必用any。6不是现在(now)，是去年冬天(last winter)。7这句的意思很不清楚，所以无法进行修改。“他们有一幢大的房子养鸡”还是“他们造了一间很大的鸡舍让鸡住”？8注意保持时态一致！9这不是英语，是按中文字面翻译的。参见改写后的句子。10虽然这个情况可能现在仍是真实的，但故事发生在去年冬天，所以要用过去时态。11你谈到的是村民们，而不只是一个人，所以life需要用复数形式。12使用更直接的语言。improve比better and better更好。高中水平还使用better and better这个词组不合适。13改写后使宾语更清楚。动词find的结
6、构是：find someone形容词。14如果用过去完成时态(had planned)就意味着作者不再打算这样做了。这里的打算发生在告诉父亲的同时，所以只要用一般过去时态即可。15在这里用admit不正确。它的意思是不情愿地同意某事是真实的。参见改写后的句子。虽然文章组织得当，题目要求也都在内容中体现出来，但词汇量不足以及时态的混淆降低了作文的等级。为避免这些错误，写你知道的东西。如果你不知道表达某种观点的词汇，就不要提到它。想想其他可写的东西。例如在这篇作文中，作者不应该提到池塘和鸡舍，因为他/她不清楚这些词的英文表达。他应该挑自己熟悉的东西写，或者写一些更平常的东西。高分作文秘诀之九：使用
7、恰当的过渡语。例如：表示转折关系的过渡语：however，nevertheless，on the other hand，on the contrary，conversely表示递进关系的过渡语：in addition，besides，moreover，furthermore，whats more，whats worse，to make matters worse，the most important of all，worst of all，especially，in particular，on top of that表示结果关系的过渡语：therefore，thus，consequently，
8、as a result，thats why.表示顺序关系的过渡语：firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastly/finally/eventually，last but not least，to begin with，after that，meanwhile表示总结的过渡语：in conclusion，in brief，in short，in a word，on the whole，to sum up表示个人观点的过渡语：in my opinion，as far as Im concerned，personally，as for me，to be frank表示他人观点的过渡语
9、：It is widely accepted that.；A commonly held idea is that.；It is taken for granted that.最近，你和父母回到家乡。你看到了家乡新建的一所学校，发现它与影集中父亲的母校的照片有很大的差别。请你根据下面的一组图画，描述这两所学校的不同情况，并谈谈你的感想。注意：1词数120左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】The two pictures show how greatly my fathers hometown has changed in the past twenty years.In th
10、e past，my fathers school was a big yard with a row of old houses.There was a flag pole standing alone in the yard.Several trees were planted around the houses.There was little sports equipment in it.The new school in my fathers hometown consists of a tall building and a large playground.All kinds of sports facilities can be seen on the playground.With trees and flowers in the school yard，it looks like a big garden.It is clear that the living conditions in our country have changed greatly and so has childrens learning environment.- 3 -用心 爱心 专心
