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1、安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2012届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（一）典例同龄压力(peer pressure)是青少年成长过程中经常遇到的问题。 假如你是某中学高三学生李明，你的美国笔友Jack来信询问如何应对同龄压力。请你根据以下要点提示给他回一封书信。1同龄压力不可避免；2每个人都是独特的，没必要跟他人比；3注意： 1.词数不少于120词；2.可适当增加细节。【写作策略】1仔细审题：(1)体裁：书信。(2)时态：一般现在时。(3)人称：第一人称。2确定结构：(1)Formal greeting可以用 Dear Sir/Madam/Dr Smith等。(2)Body language正文
2、内容。(3)Formal ending正式建议信结束语还要带上 Yours truly/sincerely等。3筛选词汇：glad，common，vocabulary，make suggestions，put.to use，learn.from.等。)4句型搜索：(Its very important for sb.to do，Id like to.等。)5组句成篇：(常用firstly，secondly，besides，last but not least等。)【范文赏析】Dear Jack，In your last email，you asked about how to deal wit
3、h peer pressure.Im very glad to share my views with you.Peer pressure is a common problem for us young students.We often find someone who is superior to us.For example，they come from a better family，or they have more talents.Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it.Secondly，we must know
4、that every one of us is unique and has our own advantages.We neednt compare ourselves with others.Thirdly，we can learn from those who have real talents.Its useless just to envy them.By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly.I hope my advice can be of help to you.【名师点评】得体而礼貌地
5、表达了自己的热情，同时，为下文述建议做好了铺垫。层层递进，是文章具有思想性的集中体现。客气地表达了自己的愿望。总体评价：思路清晰，层次感强；作者的建议具有极强的针对性。【写作指导】Elegance(优雅)(原文) Soso(普通)(1)Im very glad to share my views with you.Now I will tell you how I deal with such problems.(2)We often find someone who is superior to us. We often find that some people are better th
6、an us in some aspects.(3)Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it. Firstly，I think we must take this seriously. (4)By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly.We can learn from their advantages and we can improve ourselves at the same time.(5)I hope my advice can b
7、e of help to you.I hope my advice will help you.【临摹翻译】1范文佳句：In your last email，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure.临摹翻译：在班会上，我们讨论了如何有效处理那些问题。At the class meeting，we discussed how to deal with the problems effectively.2范文佳句：We often find someone who is superior to us.临摹翻译：他在技术上超过了他的对手。 He
8、is technically superior to his competitors.3范文佳句：Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it.临摹翻译： 我认为我们最好接受他的创意观点而不是反对它。 I think we had better accept his creative idea rather than oppose it.4范文佳句：We neednt compare ourselves with others.临摹翻译： 把我们的状况和他们的状况相比较后我们很受鼓舞。We are much inspired after comparing their situations with ours.5范文佳句：Its useless just to envy them.临摹翻译：与第一次见面的人握手是非常必要的。It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone.6范文佳句：I hope my advice can be of help to you.临摹翻译：我们都知道，在旅游时一张地图是很有帮助的。We all know that a map is of great help when traveling.- 2 -用心 爱心 专心
