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1、CET4WritingSkills Practices 关于CET4作文 作文分数为142分 占总分的15 要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文 作文体裁包括 议论文 说明文 应用文等 CET4作文样题 PartI Writing 30minutes Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2
2、 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议 CET4作文结构示意图 题目 段落I 主题句 推展句1 论据或例证 下同 推展句2 推展句3 段落II 主题句 推展句1 推展句2 推展句3 结尾句1 根据需要而定 可有可无 段落III 主题句 推展句1 推展句2 推展句3 结尾句1 统揽全文 呼应中心 WritingSkills LectureSeries 第一步 审题 1 2分钟 1 题目 aboutonlineshopping2 三个段首句 A段 提出现象B段 分析现象C段 表明个人观点 建议 第二步 布局 5分钟 用英语思维 段落I 主题句 推展句1 对现象的具体阐述 推展句2 结果
3、段落II 主题句 好处 推展句1 原因1 convenient time saving 推展句2 原因2 diversityofproductstochoosefrom 主题句 问题 推展句1 原因1 beaddicted becheated 段落III 推展句1 budget 推展句2 choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers 结尾句1 统揽全文 呼应中心 第三步 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 A段 第一句 完全翻译提示 CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience theinternet onlin
4、eshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion 近义表达法 受欢迎 onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 句子太简单 扩展 同位语 定语从句 状语 同位语 网上购物是什么 在网络上购买商品与服务的行为OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定语从句 网上购物的影响 大大地震动了 影响了我们的生活方式Onlineshoppin
5、ghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles 合并下列三句 Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles 合并 Onlineshopping asanac
6、tofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet isgrowinginpopularityever whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 状语 onlineshoppingiswelcomedby onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople especiallyyoungpeople由于 becauseof duetodiversereasons 合并 Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetod
7、iversereasons Onlineshopping asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二句 Who what Who Manyofficeemployees universitystudentsWhat havethehabitofonlineshopping showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarketItisestimatedthathal
8、foftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12 showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket 第三句 resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome 增加句子结构复杂性 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二段第一句翻译提示Admittedly shoppingontheI
9、nternethasalotofadvantages amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience 第二句原因一 time savingwho what why Who Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 What nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并 Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveade
10、quatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty fourhoursaday 表对比 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshavinginadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer kickingt
11、hekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二句原因二 diversityofproductsFurthermore What smore Aswell onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription 第三句原因三 less
12、expensive conventionalstoresInmostoccasions theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores makingitanappealtomostpeople 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二段 主题句 坏处 Whilethereare Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding concerning respectingthiswayofshopping 原因 不用顺序词
13、简要些 beaddicted becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping whichwillresult resultinginoverspending Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第三段 不需要主题句 建议要针对问题 Budget chooserepu
14、tedonlineshopsFrommyperspective Inmyviewpoint InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers should restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget Andbuyingonreputed reputableonlinestores onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping CET4作文常用
15、词汇或套语 一 转承语 Besides inaddition moreover however nevertheless despiteof noun thefactthat inspiteof 二 列举要点 foronething foranother Ontheonehand ontheotherhand Firstly Secondly Thirdly Finally CET4作文常用词汇或套语 三 罗列观点用词 argue insistthat consider think maintainthat recommendthat suggestthat 四 描述趋势 动态用词 主要用于图
16、表作文 increase decrease drop fall rise decline fluctuate sharply dramatically slightly greatly moderately CET4作文常用词汇或套语 五 时间词 inrecentyears inthepastfewdecades nowadays today inmoderntimes inourtimes age 六 引述个人观点用词 AsfarasIamconcerned Asforme Inmypart speakingfrommyownexperience 七 引述原因用词 Whyisthat It sprobablybecause Whathascausedtheproblem Thereasonwhy isthat CET4作文常用词汇或套语 八 总结论点用词 Tosumup Inconclusion Allinall 九 表述明确观点用词 Itgoeswithoutsayingthat Undoubtedly Nodoubt 十 引述结果用词 Asaresult Asaconsequen
