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6、hemanandthedoctormarried andthewomanleft c Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion d Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma Finally themanleft negative negative positive negative Competition Chooseyo
7、urteamleader 1 目睹 见证 2分 vt 2 他说过的最甜蜜的话 2分 提示词sweet 3 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了 4分 提示词tears see witness Thesweetestwordshehaseversaid Thebutterflycouldn thelpsheddinghertearssadly Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown 2 第三年的最后一天 2分 Onthelastdayofthethirdy
8、ear 1 变深 使加深 2分 vt vi deepen 3 他们的爱已成为回忆 4分 Theirlovehasbecomememories Theirlovehasturnedintomemories Theirlovehasbecomeapast 2 揭露真相 2分 1 被打动的 受感动的 2分 adj be by touched uncoverthetruth exposethetruth revealthetruth moved impressed 3 对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过 4分 提示词regret 用倒装句式 NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhav
9、edoneforhim 1 唤醒 2分 vt awaken rouse 2 遭受许多挫折 2分 gothroughmanyobstacles suffermanystruggles 3 男人震惊了 越发觉得后悔和内疚 4分 提示词regrets guilt Themanwasshocked andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger draft Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecould
10、donothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon Paragraphy2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 四人一组 完成写作任务 每人扮演重要角色如下 Role1 ThemecontrollerRole2 StructurebuilderRole3 GrammarcheckerRole4 Coherence 连贯 master 每人至少写两句 VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruth
11、tothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon draft Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday Timewentbyquickly Onthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedea
12、lbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriend Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid Hearingthis thebutterflycouldn tbreathe Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair Atthatmoment sherealizedthathewouldn tknowhersacrificesand
13、theirlovehasbecomeapast Paragraphy2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone draft Thebutterflysaid No NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim movedbyherwords Godwaslostinthought shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn tdeservethat So thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor
14、 swedding Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim Obviously themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman sforgiveness Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon tlethergo Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime Paragraphy1 Th
15、ebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedToher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon afterrevision Witnessingtheirlovedeepenwitheachpassingdayswasextremelyhardforher Timeslippedbyquickly OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywa
16、salmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriendwithabeautifulring swearingthesweetestwordshehaseversaid Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbacktears Shewastremblingandcouldnotfeelherheartbeating Withdeepgriefandgreatdespair sheflewaway Atthatmoment shecompletelyrealizedthattimehasburiedeverythingaswellashersacrifices andtheirlovehasturnedintodustymemories Paragraphy2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone Thebutterflycleanedhertearyeyesandsaid No IneverfeelsorryforanythingIdofor
