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1、 续写语言表达之积累一、悲伤1. The girls voice began to crack（变声，破裂）. She shook her head sadly. Suddenly she began to shake, and stopped talking. (语言无言)2. Her eyes are flooded with tears (眼睛)3. Tears are rolling down from her eyes. (眼睛)4. Tears welled up（涌出，流入） in her eyes. (眼睛)5. Eyes begin to water. （眼睛）6. I so
2、bbed（啜泣） bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down（往下流） my face. (动作)7. I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously（不知不觉地，无意识地）, unable to hold back my tears. (动作)8. There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby（破旧的） little couch and weep（流泪，哭泣）.
3、 (动作)9. He shivered（颤抖） slightly, shaking his head and turned to the girl to give her a look of pity（令人哀伤的神情）. (动作)10. My heart ached. (心理活动)11. The last word went like a bullet（子弹） to my heart. (心理活动)13. A ripple of （一阵）sadness welled up inside him. (心理活动)14. The grief（悲伤） comes in waves（波浪）. (心理活动
4、)15. The sky is overcast（阴天的）, darkened with gloomy（阴郁的） clouds. (风、云描写)16. An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd. (整体氛围营造)二、高兴1. He was so delighted, unable to say a word. (语言之内容)2. “Aha! I catch you!” a trace of pleasure can be noticed in his voice. (语言之语调)3. A smile lit up his fa
5、ce and his eyes were shining with great joy. (表情之眼睛)4. Tears of happiness poured down his cheeks. His eyes brim over with warm excited tears. (表情之眼泪)5. His mouth curved into a radiant smile. (表情之嘴巴)6. Every freckle on his cheeks was dancing with joy. (表情之脸部)7. The ribbon on her pigtail is dancing in
6、 the wind. (头发、发饰等)8. He gave a jump in the air, twirled, ran a few steps, stopped, looked all around, sniffed the smells of afternoon, and set off walking down through the orchard. (动作)9. He felt the warmth surging through his body. (内心活动)10. Flowers are waving in the breeze of the early spring. （环
7、境之风）11. It felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of his skin. (环境之阳光)12. Lying under the vast starry summer sky, he felt calmness and tranquility sweeping through his body. (环境之星空)12. The sounds were then accompanied by the gracefully waving reeds and bowing bamboos. (环境之树木花草等)13.
8、 Two hummingbirds flitted from behind the flowers and dived directly into the mirror-like lake. (环境之湖泊等)14. I beamed at him, “Welcome back,” (人文环境之他人)15. An air of delight and passion settled over the crowd. (环境之整体氛围)三、紧张1. with butterflies in his stomach.心里由于紧张七上八下2. At the moment, Mac heard a terr
9、ible bark, which brought his heart into his mouth. 3. Panicked, Mac found the wolf striking the car fiercely.4. Becky was on pins and needles 如坐针毡，坐立不安while watching in the car.5. He was all nervous when. 6. He was so nervous that he could hardly breathe.7. They are like ants on the hot pot. 热锅上蚂蚁8.
10、 At the very moment, Macs panic rose and he could feel his heart jumping wildly.四、害怕1. Macs panic rose / felt shivery at 2. He was trembled with fearspoked in trembling faint voice五、感动1. Touched deeply/immensely, we2. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.3. With tears streamin
11、g down her face, she.六、愤怒：1. I was seized by anger.2. He was fuming with rage.3. His anger boiled over.4.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.5. He was breathing fire and fury.6. His voice trembled with anger.7. He gave me a look of burning anger.8. He glared at me with burning eyes.9. He flare
12、d up at the word.10. His face clouded with anger.七、危机时刻 Without hesitationAt the very momentpromptly/instantly立刻马上 Without a second thoughtand the next second1. Without hesitation, Mac jumped down from the bike and slid into the back seat of the car.2. At the very moment, Macs panic rose and he coul
13、d feel his heart jumping wildly.3. And the next second, the wolf was scratching at the window through which Mac could see clearly, attempting to tear Mac apart.八、动词使用的丰富性1、如：用更明确的单词替代“say” 方式：shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, tell, predict, repeat, gues
14、s, imply 态度：refuse, agree, admit, complain, smile, urge, apologize, sigh, beg, explain, promise, comfort, compromise, warn. 问答：ask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply.通过副词及介词短语等，使“say”表达的更加形象： firmly, excitedly, seriously, jokingly, sincerely. in great surprise/a low voice/a soft voice With delight/excite
15、ment/embarrassment/pride/respect/satisfaction/caution /patience.2、通过恰当的动作描写让叙述更加生动：Eyes: stare/glare at, look her in the eye/ with her eyes shining/ eyes filled with tears/eyes sparkle with excitement/gratitudeHands: pat him on the shoulder/head, grasp/ hold ones hands/ point to sb/sth, wave his handsHead:nod/shake his head violentlyThe fierce/frightening wolf:1.Howling wildly,疯狂地嚎叫 the wolf crashed 刮伤the car and scratched 抓at it with its sharp claws用它锋利的爪子 fiercely.2.Meanwhile, the wolf exposing its sharp teeth 露出锋利的牙齿caught up with the car, making (make)
