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1、 Period 5Writing读后续写动物描写技法指导读后续写的文章要注意以下几点：第一点：读懂前文，把握文章的关键信息和语言特点。第二点：按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。第三点：要注意保持卷面整洁，字体工整清晰；严格控制字数。典例演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Brady is a recently retired search and rescue dog. He is not happy and misses his owner Al because Al has gone out on a rescue mis
2、sion without him. Als nephew Steve decides to take Brady along when he and his friend Zach go on an overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning has set the woods on fire. Windblown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The lo
3、ng dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox (危机四伏的地区), and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steves arm. “Lets go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.”Brady barked_a_sharp_warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of s
4、moke across the trail. Theyd never make it through thattheyd have to find another escape_route. The dog was tugging (拖，拉) at his leash (皮带) trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
5、Brady lifted his head and snuffed (出声地嗅) the smokeladen wind. Next moment, the dog bounded away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he didnt come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve helped Zach up the slope. He couldnt blame Brady for panicking an
6、d bolting. He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way. They hadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came bounding toward them.注意：1所续写短文的词数应在150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：“Whereve you been？” Steve cried.
7、Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the incline and into the trees. 精彩范文Paragraph 1：“Whereve you been？” Steve cried. He bent down and held tightly to Brady,_“Never will you leave me again！” He then checked the leash to ensure that Brady wouldnt escape again. The fierce fire kept burning, straight t
8、owards their slope under the control of wind. Despair surrounded Steve and Zach. What could they do now? Surprisingly, Steve found Brady was struggling to pull him down the slope. “Wherere you heading？” “Steve，” Zach said, “you have told me that Brady was a rescue dog, right? Why not give him a chan
9、ce？” Steve gave it a second thought and agreed.Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the incline and into the trees. The air was full of smoke,_and to their huge astonishment, Brady was leading them to an alternative escape_route,_exactly opposite to the river. After some initial hesitation, Steve ch
10、ose to trust Brady. Smoke getting thicker, sight growing weaker, they ran after Brady blindly. It seemed a century had passed, a lake with a boat on its surface, came into sight. “Wow! Thank you, Brady! You saved us all！” So far, it taught us that animals are worth our trust!总评本篇范文在原文的基础上能够合理进行续写，通过
11、提示句巧妙衔接所续写的下文，Paragraph 1描写了火势的严重性以及关键时刻选择相信Brady的决定，Paragraph 2描述了Brady如何帮人们脱险，全文一气呵成，续写自然。亮点呈现(1)“Never will you leave me again！”是“never”开头的否定倒装。(2)“smoke getting thicker, sight growing weaker”，这种独立主格并列，很有气场，渲染了当时的恶劣环境。(3)“It seemed a century had passed”，这个用“seem”描写心理活动的写法很实用。跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写
12、，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast.“Hello！” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat. “Somethings wrong with their fishing net，” he
13、 said. They got nearer to the net.“Whats that？” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. Its alive.”Very slowly they moved nearer.“I can see it now，” said Tonya. “Its a killer_whaleits hurt. Theres blood in the water. How can we help it？”“I can see it too. Its a baby but we must be careful，” said
14、 Max.Jack jumped into the water, “I can get the net off its fin (鳍)，” he said.Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.“Jack！” Tonya shouted. “Get in quickly.” Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish. “That baby killer whale . I am going to call it Lucky，” he said.As they moved away, it began to rain harder
