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1、书面表达 2019 六 书面表达 共1 小题 计 12 分 请将答案填写在答题卡指定位置 58 再读本试卷阅读理解A 篇材料 依据故事情节 下午 Mr Chen 会与 David 谈话 请以 A Talk with David 为题续写故事 词数 100 左右 要求 1 仿照阅读理解A 篇材料写作手法 采用叙述 对话或二者结合的形式续写故事 2 内容要涉及A 篇中的信件 缺课等相关信息以及Mr Chen 的建议 3 观点正确 条理清晰 表达流畅 4 题目与开头已给出 不计入总词数 A Talk with David At the end of the day Mr Chen spoke to
2、David about his absence 六 书面表达 共1 小题 计 12 分 58 参考例文 A Talk with David Possible version1 At the end of the day Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence Did your mother really write that letter Mr Chen asked David s face turned red and then pale No sir she didn t I wrote it I m very sorry sir It s the
3、 P E isn t it said Mr Chen You are avoiding something aren t you Yes sir David admitted And what have you been doing these Thursdays Mr Chen asked I have been studying in the library replied David eagerly Oh well at least you didn t run off to the cinema said Mr Chen But you were very silly What wil
4、l happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal David felt ashamed of himself But I won t tell anybody if you promise me two things Mr Chen added David looked up hopefully I want you to promise never to do anything like this again If you have any problems discuss them with your parents o
5、r with me first Mr Long knows all about this He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights Talk to him after school on Monday OK Yes sir said David with a sigh of relief Thank you very much David felt happier as he went home Possible version2 At the end of the day Mr Chen spoke t
6、o David about his absence Did your mother really write that letter No sir she didn t I wrote it I m very sorry sir David felt ashamed of himself It s the P E isn t it You are avoiding something aren t you Yes sir And where have you been going these Thursdays To the public library sir I was studying
7、there Oh well at least you didn t run of to the cinema But you were very silly What will happen if I report this o your parents and the Principal But I won t tell anybody if you promise me two things David looked up hopefully I want you to promise never to do anything like this again If you have any
8、 problems discuss them with your parents or with me first Mr Long knows all about this He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights Talk to him after school on Monday Is that agreed Yes sir Thank you very much David felt happier as he went home Possible version 3 A Talk With Dav
9、id At the end of the day Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence He asked if the letter was really from his mother and why he was absent from P E class on Thursday David felt sorry and told Mr Chen that the letter was written by himself And just because he was afraid of heights he wanted to avoid c
10、limbing up the rope in the Thursday s P E class But he stayed in the library to study Mr Chen told David that it was wrong for him to lie to the teachers Anyway it was good that he studied in the library At last Mr Chen advised David to go to his PE teacher next Monday or Tuesday Mr Long could help
11、him 评分标准 1 考生能采用适当的时态 语态 运用适当的句式和词语进行表述 说理恰当 论述充分 层次清楚 阅卷教师根据具体情况判分 不受参考答案影响 2 对于语言结构运用丰富 表述充分 说理恰当 语言流畅 能充分显示出考生灵活运用语 言能力的文章 可以给满分 分四档评分 第一档 内容完整 表述充分 层次结构清晰 语言丰富 流畅 规范 准确 10 12 分 第二档 内容完整 表述比较充分 层次结构比较清晰 语言比较流畅 规范 有少量语言错 误 7 9 分 第三档 内容不够完整 表述不够充分 层次结构不够合理 有较多语言错误 4 6 分 第四档 内容不完整 语言表述错误很多或仅几个单词可读 不
12、能完整表达意思 0 3 分 2018 六 书面表达 58 照镜子 是生活中的平常事 以生活为镜 可以照出现实中真实的自己 请以 Me in the mirror 为题 写一篇 80词以上的英语短文 围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点 重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短 完善自我 成长为更好的自己 要求 1 题目已给出 不计入总词数 2 观点正确 条理清晰 表达流畅 3 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称 答案 Me in the mirror Looking at myself in the mirror I know I am an outgoing girl I like to m
13、ake friends and I m always ready to help them So I m very popular in my school But I have a big problem I m less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games so I don t get good grades which make my parents disappointed When I go
14、to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends I hope we can help each other and learn from each other I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it I decide to have a healthier lifestyle I ll spend more time on my schoolwork and dev
15、elop good learning habits I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully What s more I will read more books and master good leaning methods I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me 解析 这是一篇话题作文 根据所给的材料介绍一下镜子里的我 所提供的材料中涉及到 介绍自己的最突出的一至两个优点和缺点 重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬
16、长避短 完善自我 成长为更好的自己 时态为一般现在时 人称为第一人称 注意作文中必须包含 所给的材料的所有信息 并适当发挥 写作时 避免使用汉语式的英语 尽量使用我们熟悉 的句子或短语 语法要正确 表达要符合英语习惯 注意时态 时间状语的搭配及主谓一致 问题 写作中适当使用连词 注意上下文联系紧密 符合逻辑关系 表达具有条理性 高分句型一 I m less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class 我对功课不太感兴趣 上课也 不能集中精力 be interested in 短语的使用 使文章增色不少 高分句型二 In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games so I don t get good grades which make my parents disappointed 业余时间 我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上 所以我没有取得好成绩 这使我的父母很失望 which make my parents disappointed 是由 which 引
