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1、第一部分 医学考博写作简介摘要写作概况例句：随着现代医疗科技的发展，越来越多的疾病找到了治疗方式。With the development of modern medical science and technology, surgeons/doctors have found cures for more and more diseases.（正）As developping of modren medical science and techonlogy, more and more diseases find cures.（误）单词的记忆与应用单词怎么背？背准单词的四个方面：1、读音2、
2、外形3、词义4、用练习：practice对写作的整体认识认识两个人：出题的和改卷的1、出题的：a. 内容：医学科普文章 b. 形式 c. 时间和字数：50分钟；约200词2、改卷的：高分策略：1、字迹清楚；段落明朗 2、要点完整；紧扣提纲 3、首保正确；再求闪光 4、主体段落；先总后分 5、语句连贯；连词用上评分实例实例一Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least
3、150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:1当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。2诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 1. In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So
4、 many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better
5、mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product againSo, as the above is said, it pays
6、to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social（11分） 2. Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the examsDishonest people are short-sighted. Those w
7、ho sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain resp
8、ect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees
9、 to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later（18分）3. With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearlyNowadays, there are many dishones
10、t performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and sated them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale
11、at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good qualityFrom the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our da
12、ily life.（7分）第二部分 写作常见错误分析六种易犯错误4句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.Everywhere can find skyscrapers and flyovers in Beijing today.The apples five dollars per kilo. / This girl very beautiful.Finally, the service. The canteen workers arent patient enough when serving us.（二）动词形式错误 1时态错误
13、3单复数错误 1）A/The Wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.（三）代词错误 1）As long as one works hard, you can learn English well.（四）冠词错误（五）词性错误错误改正方式1、老师修改2、自己修改（互相修改）3、跟范文对照4、对译第四部分 句子写作练习复合句1将下面每组中的两个句子合并，将其中一个改为主语从句。1）They need more help in English. That is quite obvious.2）She is still alive
14、. That is good news.3）She will come here. It doesnt seem likely.4）We are badly in need of something. It is raw material.3将下面每组中的两个句子合并，将其中一个改为宾语从句，并且用it作形式宾语。1）I was far more intelligent than he was. I always took that for granted.2）You were unable to attend our meeting. We all thought that was a pi
15、ty.3）You should mind your manners. We consider that is important.4）He was too ill to go on working. He didnt want that to be known.5将下面每组中的两个句子合并，将其中一个改为同位语从句。1）He is growing old. Nothing could hide the fact.2）He works hard. The fact does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.3）I have a complacent feeling. I feel that Im highly intelligent.4）He explained that he didn
