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1、One possible version:Dear student,Im sorry for the bad situation you are facing. From your letter, I learn that you and your classmates are suffering from heavy pressure with the approach of the college entrance examination. Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to deal with it.In my opini
2、on, a proper amount of pressure can help you do/perform well in the exam. You can release pressure by listening to music ,taking exercise and talking with friends or parents. Besides, you should learn to keep a balance between study and entertainment (As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes
3、Jack a dull boy”). Another important thing I want to tell you is that entering a good university isnt the only way to success. Many students who graduate from schools of technology with special skills can find good jobs and have wonderful careers , too.In a word, nothing is more important /matters m
4、ore than a good state of mind. So its quite necessary to set a realistic goal and at the same time take a positive attitude towards the difficulties and challenges facing you . If you follow these pieces of advice, youll realize your goal sooner or later.Best wishes Editor One possible version:Dear
5、student,Im sorry for the bad situation you are facing. From your letter, I learn that you and your classmates are suffering from heavy pressure with the approach of the college entrance examination. Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to deal with it.In my opinion, a proper amount of pre
6、ssure can help you do/perform well in the exam. You can release pressure by listening to music ,taking exercise and talking with friends or parents. Besides, you should learn to keep a balance between study and entertainment (As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”). Another
7、 important thing I want to tell you is that entering a good university isnt the only way to success. Many students who graduate from schools of technology with special skills can find good jobs and have wonderful careers , too.In a word, nothing is more important /matters more than a good state of m
8、ind. So its quite necessary to set a realistic goal and at the same time take a positive attitude towards the difficulties and challenges facing you . If you follow these pieces of advice, youll realize your goal sooner or later.Best wishes Editor 作文讲评：Para.1Dear student, Im sorry for the bad situat
9、ion you are facing. From the letter, I have learned that you feel anxious about the college entrance examination and are confused about how to deal with the situation. As for the problems you have mentioned, I want to give you some suggestions. 张佳睿Dear student, Im sorry for the bad situation you are
10、 facing. In your letter , you point out that there are some situations where you and your classmates suffer from stress. Im really sympathetic to you, but dont worry. Here are some suggestions offered. 薛凯茜Dear student, Im sorry for the bad situation you are facing. From your letter I have learned th
11、at you are suffering from anxiety caused by the coming college entrance examination. In view of your situation, here are some suggestions for you to refer to / follow. 顾培源Para. 2可用短语等：take a positive attitude to / towards challenges and difficulties in lifeAs we all know, failure is the mother of su
12、ccess, so in no case / at no time should you lose hope / heart when meeting with failure; some feel hopeless about their future; be convinced that you can achieve success / realize your dream one day; work out regularly / take proper exercise to build up your body so that you can keep energetic / be
13、 full of energy to deal with endless work; have enough sleep rather than stay up too late at night and make full use of time and learn to improve studying efficiency; set a suitable goal based on your own ability; never expect too much of yourself; learn to achieve / keep a balance between study and
14、 entertainment / relaxation ; as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. have more communication with parents and friends to relieve your stress; turn to teachers when meeting with difficulties in your studies. Be confident of yourselves / have confidence in yourselves and nev
15、er give up / say die because persistence is what it takes to succeed in doing anything well. Going to university is not the only way to success because in history there are many famous successful people who have never received a college education / higher education. Keep in mind that its normal to feel anxious with the approach of such an important exam and proper anxiety provides you with motivation to work hard. Nothing matters more than a good state of mind. 作文资
