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1、第三讲润色习作的3种高效策略精准选词，妙笔生花从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出，恰当选用贴切、地道的高级词汇对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通词汇，可以提高文章的得分档次。为写作增添色彩。请考生牢记并熟练运用下面的词汇。一、选用高级词汇“四原则”1具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起阅卷人的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似a nice/good man的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的，具体的词描绘一个人，如kindhearted(好心的)；gener
2、ous(慷慨的；大方的)；easygoing(随和的)等。再如：It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a good atmosphere.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.2新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult.In the com
3、ing three years，our school life will be challenging.3短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to help me.I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to do me a favor.(全国卷书面表达)4避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用
4、某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate .If you want to participate，you can send your photos to .Any student who is interested is welcome to participate .If you want to join，you can send your photos to .(全国卷书面表达)二、高级词汇积累45例1另外besidesin addition/whats more2
5、总之in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary3但是buthowever4机会chanceopportunity5选择choicealternative6考虑considertake into account/consideration7最终finallyeventually8勤奋的hardworkingdiligent9分发hand outdistribute10后果resultconsequence11应该shouldbe supposed to12决定decidemake up ones mind13理解understandmake sense
6、 of/figure out 14可用的usableavailable15使用useemploy/make use of16艰难的difficultpainstaking17改正，修改correctpolish18不同的differentvarious19想要wantintend20做，从事dotake up21获得getgain22记住rememberkeep in mind23种类繁多all kinds ofa wide range of24和andas well as25反对be againstobject to26厌烦be bored withbe fed up with27忙于be
7、busy in/withbe occupied in/with28发生happenoccur/come about29提高improvepromote30重要的importantvital31立即immediatelyin a flash32参加joinparticipate33巨大的largeenormous34有意义的meaningfulrewarding35许多manya large quantity of36明显的obviousapparent37合适的properappropriate38丰富的richabundant39与不同be different fromdiffer/vary
8、 from40渴望做be eager to dobe dying to do/long to do41因为because ofon account of42闻名be famous forhave a reputation for43越来越多more and morean increasing number of44感到舒心feel comfortablefeel at ease45成功做某事succeed in doing sth.make it题组过关1升级文中加黑词汇Dear editor，With the development of economy，more and more (1._
9、)Chinese people are making a trip at home and abroad，which makes us not only enjoy more beautiful scenery but also learn more about the culture and the customs of the places we visit.Unfortunately，some of us shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has harmed(2._) the good reputation of us Chines
10、e.In my opinion，when going on trips，we should behave ourselves and obey the culture and customs there.Besides (3._)，the environment should (4._) be protected.In this way，we will win respect for ourselves and (5._) our country.Finally (6._)，we should always remember (7._) that it is everyones respons
11、ibility to uphold the image of our motherland.Yours sincerely，Li Hua答案：1.an increasing number of 2.done harm to3.In addition4.is supposed to5.as well as6Eventually7.keep in mind句式丰富，表述地道写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次复合句包括定语从句，状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从
12、句和同位语从句)。1增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。I am Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in London during the summer holiday.I am Li Hua，a student from China，who is studying in London during the summer holiday.(2019全国卷书面表达)The film is main
13、ly related to the development of our school.It will greatly help us students know the schools history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our schools development.The film is mainly related to the development of our school，which will greatly help us students know the schools history bett
14、er and appeal to us to make contributions to our schools development.(2019全国卷书面表达)We will go to Spring Mountain and there we can have a chimb.We will go to Spring Mountain where we can have a climb.(2017浙江卷6月应用文写作)2吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。Secondly，the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.(2019江苏卷书面表达)If you have any opinion about the film，please send emails to .(2018全国卷书面表达)We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.(2016全国卷书面表达)When it comes to the season I like best，spring will always occur to me in
