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1、六级写作 满分评分标准解读CET作文题采用总体评分方法。从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。满分15分，根据考试大纲的评分标准，给出的最高的14分评分标准为：14分：切题，表达思想清楚。语言通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误；解读：A. “切题，表达思想清楚”：所谓切题，最直观的理解就是“不跑题”，在四六级英语写作中，跑题是比较难的，因为题目会给出非常明确的观点选择或者命题场景。所谓表达思想清
2、楚，尤其对于四六级写作中的给出两种观点，问你同意哪一个观点的时候，这个时候建议同学们要有清晰的观点倾向，即便你会对比两种观点各自的利弊，最终你清晰的preference是给考官非常重要的信息传递。B. “语言通畅，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误”：这一条主要要求考生的语言的逻辑和语言的使用能力。在四六级写作中，虽然不像GRE GMAT这种高端逻辑写作对逻辑要求那么高，但是逻辑的通畅也是最基本的，而且只有逻辑通畅了，语言才是通畅的。但是英文作为“形合”语言，既注重“内容逻辑”也注重“形式逻辑”，例如必要的逻辑引导信号，firstly，secondly，whereas，on the other ha
3、nd，all in all.都能引领读者和考官更加清晰的把握你的文章的起承转合。关于语言错误，建议大家还是要高标准严格要求自己，用最地道的书面英文进行写作，四六级写作还不是真正的文章写作，但是是非常好的过渡都GRE TOEFL、甚至论文写作的桥梁，培养自己书面化表达的严谨性和地道性。2007年12月六级作文真实批改报告 题型：英语六级作文题目：2007年12月英语四级作文原文字数：173批改时间：2013年08月09日 20：27Nowadays, we can never fail to find the phenomenon 1that digital devices are used m
4、ore and more widely, such as mp3,mp4,digital cameras 2, mobile phones, 3and so on. As we can see, digital devices have a huge 4infuluence on our modern society. First, they are changing our method of working. Using the internet, we are able to work on our computers in our own homes instead of 5in of
5、fices, which means our time can be more flexible. Second, our learning efficiency 6are improved by 7them. For instance, we can take some online classes 8to 9promote our studies, whereas mp3 can benefit our English and listening abilities. Third, they help our lives become more meaningful and colorfu
6、l. For example, with mobile phones 10we can communicate 11more than before, which is good for maintaining the relationships with our family and friends. As is mentioned above, thanks to the fast development of technology, digital devices are 12becming more and more powerful and useful. Only by adapt
7、ing to digital devices, can we live a better life.错误归类分析：格式错误：1：批改解释：Poor formation. 修改建议：of digital devices being used.标点错误：2: 批改解释：The punctuation mark is not needed. 修改建议：Omit. Use “and”.10: 批改解释：A comma is missing. 修改建议：,多余文字：3: 批改解释：Avoid using this kind of phrase in a formal essay. 修改建议：Omit.9
8、: 批改解释：Not needed. 修改建议：Omit.拼写错误(SPL)：4: 批改解释：Wrong spelling. 修改建议：influence.12: 批改解释：Wrong spelling. 修改建议：becoming.介词错误：5: 批改解释：Not needed. 修改建议：Omit.8: 批改解释：Poor choice of preposition. 修改建议：of.时态错误：6: 批改解释：Verb tense error. 修改建议：is.选词错误：7: 批改解释：Poor diction. 修改建议：Using such electronic gadgets lik
9、e computers.单词缺失：11: 批改解释：A word is missing. 修改建议：conveniently.得分11.0分（满分30分）切题 Response to the prompt 文章切题，阐说充分response to the prompt with adequate explanation文章结构 Organization 段落组织有序，衔接紧密well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well论点扩展和细节运用 Development and Details 段落内句与句连接顺畅，句式使用恰当
10、，用词确切，得体，论证充分coherent structure, appropriate word usage, adequate exampling语法 Grammar 表达准确，简单句、复杂句使用流畅accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy总评该篇文章得分为11分（满分为30分）。能基本清清楚楚地表达，框架完整，语言、逻辑有小的瑕疵。范文重写Of late, the world has gone technological, affecting not only the way peopl
11、e communicate or gather information, but even their life styles. Gadgets like televisions, radios, music players and phones have grave effect on people.Technological advancement in spheres like computers has changed the way people gather information or communicate. Gone are the days of physical lett
12、er writing. An email takes just two seconds to reach its destination. Work and studying are made easy because they can be effected from homes. Boredom is a myth as people can listen to music and watch movies on music players and phones. With a phone, a friend or family member is as close as ones nos
13、e.On the whole, a digital world is of noble welcome for it amasses numerous advantages and benefits to people 2008年06月六级作文真实批改报告 题型：英语六级作文题目：2008年06月英语四级作文原文字数：188批改时间：2013年08月13日 15：47In the contemporary society, with the steady development of information technology, the 1E-books are playing a more
14、 and more important role in our 2life. A great 3deal of people hold the view that E-books will replace the traditional 4paper books in the long run. Apparently, there are several reasons 5of this idea. First, compared to traditional books, the E-books is much more accessible, as there 6exist a lot o
15、f 7book resources on the internet. Second, since the cost of producing e-books is much lower8.the E-books 9boasts the price advantage. Last but not least, the e-books are easier to 10transport 11whereas it is more convenient to keep and store them 12the same. From my point of view, I insist that E-books 13will be used more and more widely, but it will not replace the traditional books. On one hand, not all the people are accustomed to 14read books on digital devices. On the other hand, reading ondigital devices
