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10、y 六班马林洁Thisisaphotoofmyuncle sfamily ThemanismyuncleDale ThewomanismyauntMary MycousinsSallyandMikeareinfrontofmyuncleandmyaunt Theyhaveahappyfamily 标准答案 Hereisaphotoofmyuncle sfamily ThisismyuncleDaleandthewomannexttoherismyauntMary ThegirlisSally ThboyisMike SallyandMikearemycousins TheyareinAmeri
11、ca 七书面表达I mTom I m13yearsold I minClass6 Grade7inNo 3MiddleSchol I mgoodatEnglishandcomputer AfterschoolIoftenlistentomusicandplayfootballwithmyfriends Collectingstampsismyhobby Myfavouritefoodisfish Myfatherisamanager Heworksinafactory MymotherisanEnglishteacher Sheworksinmyschool Ilovemyfamily 周考答
12、案 单词拼写是弱点 作文也是弱项 所以 以后该在那方面加强 多记单词 多练习写作文 作文例子 七书面表达 10分 根据提示以Myfriend为题写一篇短文 基本情况 Millie 12岁 英国人 第五中学七年级一班学生 打算交些新朋友 学习情况 最喜欢的学科是数学 经常帮助同学学习 盼望取得好成绩 兴趣爱好 喜欢打篮球 听音乐 擅长 讲英语 会说汉语 计划这个周末去公园捡拾垃圾 分析 1 人称 应该是第三人称 而不是第一人称 2 主人公是男孩还是女孩 所以应用she her her hers 她的 是her she s sheis是 它是 的意思 3 需要分段吗 可以分三段 基本情况 学习情况
13、 兴趣爱好各占一段 是女孩 需要 要避免一些错句 1 Sheissevengrade oneclass Sheisinsevengrade oneclass SheisinClassOne GradeSevenSheisastudentinNo FiveMiddleSchool SheisinClassOne GradeSevenSheisinClassOne GradeSeveninNo FiveMiddleSchool 2Shefavouritesubjectismaths Herfavouritesubjectismaths 3Sheislikeplaybasketball Shelik
14、eplaybasketball Shelikeplayingbasketball Shelikesplayingbasketball Sheverylikesplayingbasketball Shelikesplayingbasketballverymuch 4Sheplanthisweekendgotoparkcollectlitter Sheplanstogototheparktocollectlitterinthisweekend Sheplanstogototheparktocollectlitterthisweekend Sheisgoingtocollectlitterinthe
15、parkthisweekend 好作文 张婷婷马林洁湛鹏辉Myfriend Ihaveagoodfriend Heistwelveyearsold HeisfromEngland HeisinNo FiveMiddleSchool HeisinClassOne GradeSenen Heisgoingtomakesomenewfriends Hisfavouritesubjectismaths Heoftenhelpsherclassmatestolearn Helooksforwardtogettingthebestscores Helikesplayingbasketballandlist
16、eningtomusic Heisgoodatrunnng HecanspeakEnglishandChinese AndhespeaksChineseverywell Heisgoingtocollectlitterthisweekend 人称错误 Ihaveagoodfriend Sheistwelveyearsold SheisfromEngland SheisinNo FiveMiddleSchool SheisinClassOne GradeSenen Sheisgoingtomakesomenewfriends Herfavouritesubjectismaths Sheoftenhelpsherclassmatestolearn Shelooksforwardtogettingthebestscores Shelikesplayingbasketballandlisteningtomusic Sheisgoodatrunnng ShecanspeakEnglishandChinese AndshespeaksChineseverywell Sheisgoingtocoll
