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1、Section Writing 读后续写 读后续写要求考生根据提供的语言材料 所给段落开头语和所 标关键词 续写成一篇结构完整 情节相符 逻辑衔接紧密的短文 考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力和发散思维能力 文章选材以故事类记叙文为主 故事线索逻辑性强 所给出的段 落开头与上文联系紧密 指明了续写的方向 所标关键词与故事的 时间 地点 人物 事件密切相关 读后续写要根据题目要求 在读懂原文的基础上 利用原材料的 素材 线索和情节等充分发挥想象力和创造力来进行文章续写 读透材料和续写同等重要 续写这篇短文时 考生需要明白故事的 发展进程 前因后果 地理位置变化 人物特征和情感等 续写 段的情节
2、并非唯一 可根据自己的理解续写不同的内容 在续写时 要注意以下两个方面 第一 续写段落的主题 人物 线索和语言风格要与文章一致 续写时要紧扣所给材料的中心 遵循上文明示或暗示的线索 按照 材料中人物性格发展的规律 使用与原文风格一致的语言进行续写 第二 所续写内容与所给材料结合在一起 必须是一个完整的文 章或片段 上下文衔接要自然 前后要照应 同时 在组织语言时 切记使用5个以上给出的提示词 2018 浙江高考 阅读下面短文 根据所给情节进行续写 使之构成一个完整的故 事 It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation lik
3、e never before He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West We took a plane to Albuquerque a big city in the state of New Mexico We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon Uncle Paul my dad s friend picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos His wife Tina cooked us a de
4、licious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby Very early in the morning Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast The day starts at dawn on my farm he said After br
5、eakfast I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze 吃草 I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses They looked really cool In the afternoon I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride and he said yes as long as my dad
6、 went with me I wasn t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway So my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats got on our horses and headed slowly towards the mountains Don t be late for supper Uncle Paul cried and keep to the track so that you don t get lost OK my dad cried back After a while Uncle
7、Paul and his farm house were out of sight It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks the deep green pine trees and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene It looked like a beautiful woven 编织的 blanket spread out upon the ground just for us 注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右 2 至少使用5
8、个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 写作思路小结 一 细读原文 明确篇章结构 确定续写主题 首先研读原文 确定文章的主题 明确篇章结构 阅读时 关注文 中画线的关键词 标记描述事件发展过程的词和短语 对关键词进 行分类 为我们理清文章脉络 进
9、行合理想象故事发展提供有效线 索 本文是一篇记叙文 叙述了父亲带 我 去 西部荒野 喂鸡牧羊 体验农场生活 见父亲和保罗叔叔骑马很是潇洒 我 心生向往 于 是亲身上马体验 二 剖析段首开头语 推断续写情节 把关键词分类 仔细阅读给出段落的开头语 明确其中所包含的信息并将其延伸 推断出要写的情节 续写段中应包含两部分 一部分沿用所给材 料中表示四要素的关键词 一部分是自己通过合理想象新发展的关 键词 关键词分类为 提示词 dad Uncle Paul farm house river feed sheep late track get lost sight 环境 scenery mountain
10、 range valley river lake forest sun set wind blow 动作 run cry think to oneself 情感 panic relief nervous worried 第一段的开头语Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse 这一句是故事发展的转折点 我们可以从rabbit出现后带来的 结果入手 由于第二段的开头语是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 由此可知 第一段中我们已经迷路了 这里 可以写 兔子
11、非常可爱 于是我和爸爸就去追它 然后描写我们在 森林里迷路 get lost 了 眼前 in our sight 除了树什么也没有 我 心里还想 我们不能及时赶回去吃晚饭了 第二段的开头语是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 前文保罗叔叔曾经嘱咐过我们 不要耽误吃饭 以及 不要迷了路 本段可以从如何寻找返回的路入手去写 本段开头 说 天黑了 我们不知道自己身处何地 更糟糕的是 一场意想不到的 小雨下起来 冲走了我们来时留下的痕迹 track 我差点就要崩溃 了 这时爸爸 dad 记起 保罗叔叔 Uncle Paul 的农舍
12、 farm house 在 一条小河 river 边 最终 我们找到了小河 然后沿着小河回去了 那天的晚饭确实很晚 late 三 串联情节 增加细节描写 恰当使用衔接词 把上一步中推断的情节进行串联 增加细节描写 内心情感 态 度 表情描述 从而形成完整的段落 串联时要注意选用合适的 衔接词 根据题目要求 使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词 四 润色文字 修改提升 增加语篇亮点 初稿完成后 要对续写段进行润色 即对其中的用词和句式进行 提升修改 提升后的段落语言要新颖 短语优先 善用形容词和副 词等修饰词 五 检查修改 排查错误 确保段落完整 读后续写检查的重点是一致性和完整性 通读所给材料
13、和自己 续写的内容 首先确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方 又要做到内 容上前后连贯 语句通顺 此外 还要检查有无拼写错误 标点符 号错误 大小写错误等 检查词数和画线词是否符合要求 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it After a while we completely got lost in the forest There was nothing but trees in
14、our sight We may not be able to make it back in time for supper I thought to myself Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark What s worse an unexpected shower added to the difficulty in finding a way home for all the tracks we had made disappeared I was almost breaking down when my dad said he remembered there was a river near the farm house Finding the river we would be back home Finally we found the river and along it we got back to the house We had a late supper that day
