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1、Writing PaidHoliday Somemistakes Canwerelaxwell Thekeytotheproblemmustbeno Canwerelaxwell Theanswer tothequestion issurelyno Anexampleforimprovement Whensomepeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhenitwouldbepaidholidayandhowdoyouthoughtaboutit Icouldn treplyitclearly Asyousee Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidhol
2、iday Ontheotherhand withoutworkingthenyougetmoney Wemaycausebadhabbit Paidholidaybecomepopulardaybyday Butitisalsoadream Weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Therestisabouthowgooditisifpaidholidaycomestrue Revised Whensomepeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhenitwouldbepaidholidayandhowdoyouthoughtaboutit Icou
3、ldn treplyitclearly Whenpeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhentherewouldbepaidholidayandwhatdoyouthinkaboutit Icouldn treplytoitclearly WhenaskedwhatIthinkifwehavepaidholiday Ifindithardtoanswer Tocorrectgrammaticalmistakes Asyousee Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday Ontheotherhand withoutworkingthenyou
4、getmoney Wemaycausebadhabbit Paidholidaybecomepopulardaybyday Butitisalsoadream Weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit Paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtoma
5、keitcometrue Abetterversion Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit However somepeoplesayjustbecauseourbossgenerouslypaysuswhenweenjoyourholiday wefeelgratefulandwhenwecomebacktowork wewillworkharderandbetter Sopaidholidayshouldbeencouraged Asamatteroffac
6、t paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Fullyrevised I WhenaskedwhatIthinkifwehavepaidholiday Ifindithardtoanswer Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit However somepeoplesayjus
7、tbecauseourbossgenerouslypaysuswhenweenjoyourholiday wefeelgratefulandwhenwecomebacktowork wewillworkharderandbetter Sopaidholidayshouldbeencouraged Asamatteroffact paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Fullyrevised II It s
8、wonderfultohavepaidholiday Asamatteroffact paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue dependingonhowyouaregoingtowritetherest Goodexpressions Somepeoplebelievethatthepaidvacationcanimprovethecurrenttourismpattern Forexample itca
9、nrelievethepressureoftraffic accommodation shoppingmallsandsoon Besides itisbeneficialtothesustainabledevelopmentoftourism Themostimportantisthatthepaidholidaycanmakepeopleenjoyfreedomandcanraisetheenthusiasmoftheworkers 任耀明 PaidHoliday goodexample 152words Adaptedfrom左琪 s PaidholidayoriginatedfromF
10、ranceinthe1930s Todayithasbeenwidelyacceptedandestablishedbymanycountries In2008 Chinaissuedpaidholidaypolicyafteralong termstudyandstruggle Therighttorestisbasicforushumans Workers righttorestisoneofthewaystokeepandincreasetheprofitsofcompanies Apaidholidaywillimprovetheworker senthusiasmtoworkhard
11、er Paidholidayisalsogoodfortourism Currently workerscanonlyhavetheirholidayatfixedtimewhentherearemanypeopleouttraveling Ifwepracticepaidholiday workerscanplantheirholidayflexiblysothepressureoftourismespeciallyinthegoldenweekwillberelievedandthequalityofservicecanalsobeimproved However todaythepaid
12、holidaysystemisstillnotwellestablishedinChina sowemustcontinueourstruggletilleverybodycantrulyfeelitsbenefit Otherwaystoreason Companiescannotaffordtogivetheiremployeespaidholidaybecausetheirprofitsarelow Employeesfeelluckytohaveajobconsideringtoday sfiercecompetitioninthejobmarket Theywon tbargainw
13、iththeirbossforapaidholidaytolosetheirjob Manypeopleespeciallylargenumbersofmigrantworkershavetoworkatweekends Itseemstheyneverneedaholiday nottomentionapaidholiday Paidholidayisnotnecessarilygoodbecauseonecanflexiblyplanhisholiday butthenhehastoenjoyhisvacationalone otherwisehemustfirstmakegoodarra
14、ngementswithhisfamilyorfriendssothattheycanalltaketheholidayatthesametimeanddothingstogether Wishesorsolutions Governmentcangiveallowancetocompaniestoencouragethepracticeofpaidholiday Governmentsshouldissuemoredetailedrulesofpaidholidayandthereshouldbepunishmentsforcompanieswhichignoretherules Paidholidaytogetherwithgoldenweekiswhatweshouldlongfor Theend 知识回顾KnowledgeReview
