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1、Xiamen Yingcai School Xie Jianchun 书面表达评讲之: 高级词汇与高级句式的润色升级 一、使用高级词汇 写作时，“高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然 ，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个，也会为你的 作文增添色彩。 1标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有 可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 We all have the same chance. We all possess the same chance (opportunity) We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. We have endless
2、 homework to do at the weekend. 2短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to us. The boy realized the danger and began to run away. The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away. 3避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其 他恰当的
3、同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1恰当使用被动语态 Above all, we must do something to stop pollution. Above all, something must be done to stop pollution. 2使用强调句 The accident happened
4、 the other day. The accident did happen the other day. He didnt come to the party because he was very busy. It was because he was very busy that he didnt come to the party. 3使用倒装句 We can only improve our English in this way. Only in this way can we improve our English. We dont know its value until w
5、e lose health. Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4使用省略句 Although they were faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart. Although faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart. 5使用感叹句 We had a very good time with the peasants that day. What a good time we had with the peasants that
6、 day! 6使用with复合结构 Because there was too much noise, I couldnt go on studying. With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying. 7使用虚拟语气 I didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam. If I had taken his advice, I wouldnt have failed in the exam. Its time for us to take measures to protect the wil
7、d animals. Its high time that we took measures to protect the wild animals. 2016年福建省质检书面表达 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向 全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生 李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答 。 Three pieces of a student
8、s work(学生作品） 13分13分 16分 23分 1.neat writing书写 2. content内容 3. structure结构 4. language语言 Good first impression Well organized and smoothly developed Everything required includedNo Chinglish No Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns 应用文写作五部曲 step1 Topic explori
9、ng 审题 step2 Wording 构词 step3 Sentence making 成句 step4 Essay writing 成篇 step5 Improving 修订 Step1 Topic exploring审题 1 审体裁 2 审人称 3 审时态 4 审要点 ( 定文章结构 ) 高考书面表达（重庆卷） 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向 全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生 李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意：1.词数10
10、0左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答 。 Paragraph 1: purpose of the letter Paragraph 2: key points Paragraph 3：Proper ending （to wish him a success) 三段式 总 分 总 自我介绍 写信目的 话题（我们应该感恩） 列举理由 预祝活动成功 in brief in detail in brief Step2 Wording构词 拼写 词性 近义词 同音词 单复数 冠词 大小写 Simple mistakes leave a bad impress
11、ion! My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should thankful is a good topic. Our father and mother thro
12、w thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, therere hopes to make the world better, and with a thankful heart, we
13、 can realize how beautiful life is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end. be a As looking for topics recommendtopic topic through thick and thin thankfulness 17分 Lets work on polishing your writing together! Diverse topic-related chunks Various sente
14、nce patterns HOW? From 17/18 to 21 HOW? 1. 改变词性来丰富表达 2. 添加句型/高级词汇（短语，高中阶段词汇） 3. 简单句复合句/长短句 step3 Sentencing 成句 1 简单句 2 并列句 3 复合句 4 非谓语形式 5 特殊结构 时态，语态 别忘了并列连词 No Chinglish! ! 连词的选择 主语一致 避生就熟！ 强调句型；倒装； 独立主格结构 1. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. 2. I often visit yo
15、ur web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world. I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school. Improve your sentences. I often visit your website, where I got the news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world. 1. My name is Li Hua. I
16、am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. 2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world. 1. We should thankful is a good theme. 2. Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. 3. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head,we should thank to them. 4. Only with a
