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1、适用于外研新标准版高三 高考综合版第 2 期 适用于外研新标准版高三 高考综合版第 2 期 印 刷:北京世纪华彩印务有限责任公司地址： 北京大兴区本期定价 1.6 元。 1 编辑部质量反馈热线： 0431- 81041508刘老师1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 【例题展示】 因为体育锻炼对学生的身心健康都至关重要， 所 以现在无论是政府还是学校都对体育课重视有加。请 你用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短文，记叙你上过的一 节有趣的体育课。 【思路点拨】 1. 审题立意 本篇习作的要求是记叙一节有趣的体育课，因此 文章内容应该紧紧围绕着一节体育课来展开，切勿偏 题。要注意，
2、 讲述是否喜欢上体育课、 是否应该上体育 课、 喜欢什么样的体育课等， 都属于偏题。 本篇习作是叙事类的记叙文，应以自身经历来进 行描写， 因此文章应以第一人称为主， 在描述其他同学 时要使用第三人称。 在描述这节体育课的经历时， 要使 用过去时态。 2. 谋篇布局 叙事类的记叙文要注意交代清楚事件的开始、 经 过和结果， 最后还要写下自己的感受。 其中事件的开始 就是文章要讲述的中心，在结构上起到总领全文的作 用； 体育课的经过和结果则属于文章的主体部分， 要详 细叙述； 最后要以自己的感受作为结尾， 总结全文。 文章结构文章内容 总上了一节有趣的体育课 分 体育课的内容、 经过 体育课的结
3、果 总感受 3. 遣词 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲，我们可以初步确 定文章中可能使用到的词汇 有： PE class, teacher, physical exercise, interesting, excited, happy, laugh, like, love, need . 4. 造句 把文章的主旨了然于心， 再加上词汇的铺垫， 接下 来我们就可以造句了。 为了避免句子结构错误， 我们可 以先写一些简单句， 在此基础上再通读全文， 将这些简 单句合成复合句， 或者用一些连词将简单句连接起来， 使文章更加流畅、 可读性强。如： a. Our PE teacher always has
4、interesting games to help us have enough physical exercise and relax during the hard work in Senior Three. b. We all love the PE class. c. In one class, we played a game after jogging. d. The teacher separated us into four teams. e. Every team had ten footballs. f. The teacher asked us to bring a fo
5、otball to the end one by one. g. We had to make ten jumps in rope skipping during the race. h. The team finishing ten footballs in the shortest time would be the winner. i. The game was filled with cheering and laughter. j. It made me more excited that my team finally won. k. This PE class was very
6、interesting and both our body and mind were relaxed and refreshed. (1) 在表达 “分队” 时， 我们通常会写 “The teacher separated us into four teams.” ，但是在地道的英语表达 中， 被动语态的使用往往更常见， 即 “We were separated into four teams.” ， 这样一来句意表达更直观， 相对于平 铺直叙的主动句也有更强的感情色彩。同理， f 句也可 以改为被动语态。 在英语写作中， 理解并正确使用被动 语态是提高分数的途径之一。 (2) 要表达 “每
7、队有十个足球” 时， 我们一开始可能 会写成 “Every team had ten footballs.” ， 然后我们就会发 现， 这个句子和上一句 “被分为四队” 联系十分紧密， 这 时我们可以尝试用定语从句将两个句子连接起来 “We were separated into four teams, each of which had ten footballs.” 。当然，使用独立主格结构也是可以的 “We wereseparatedintofourteams,eachhavingten footballs.” (3) 最后一句是抒发自己情感的点题之句， 我们可 以尝试用更复杂的句式结构
8、来加强情感的表达， so. that. 句式就是在这句里替代 very 的最佳选择之一， “This PE class was so interesting that both our body and mind were relaxed and refreshed.” 5. 成篇 最后， 我们要再次阅读全文， 检查文章中是否存在 拼写或语法错误，并在句与句之间增加一些衔接和过 渡性的词汇， 如 “so, but” 等， 使全文衔接自然、 语意流 畅。 如果行文仍然过渡不自然， 要考虑增加更多的过渡 性语句。 【范文展示】 Our PE teacher always has interesti
9、ng games to help us have enough physical exercise and relax during the hard work in Senior Three. So we all love the PE class. In one class, we played a game after jogging. We were separated into four teams, each of which had ten footballs. We were asked to bring a football to the end one by one. Bu
10、t it was not easy, because we had to make ten jumps in rope skipping during the race. The team finishing ten footballs in the shortest time would be the winner. The game was filled with cheering and laughter. And it made me more excited that my team finally won. This PE class was so interesting that
11、 both our body and mind were relaxed and refreshed. So we do need such a kind of PE class. 【习作点评】 这篇习作结构清晰， 叙事完整， 开篇即点出写作中 心， 然后清楚、 完整地描述了体育课的内容， 过渡自然， 最后又能合理抒发自己的情感，比较完美地完成了写 作要求。 在叙述事件的过程中， 作者合理而准确地应用 了一些复杂成分， 为文章增色不少。 【实战演习】 随着人们对健康的重视程度的增加，广场舞已经 不是大爷大妈的专属活动了，很多年轻人甚至是孩子 都加入到了广场舞大军之中。你肯定观看过广场舞表 演，
12、甚至也亲身体验过。请你写一篇 120 词左右的短 文， 叙述你观看或者参与广场舞的一次经历。 参考词汇： public square dancing _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 洪玉 （供稿） （参考范文见下期） 句子的基本成分 1. _ No matter what other people say to you, you should always insist on following your dreams. If you give in, or give up your dreams, you will never know what will happen. You onl
13、y have one life to live, so you might as well give it everything you ve got. Forget the haters. 2. _ Forgiveness is not an easy thing. However, insisting on forgiving will make you a happier person. Once you forgive someone, you can feel a weight that is lifted off your shoulders. Forgiving someone
14、doesn t mean you go back to the way things were before, but it does mean letting yourself move on in a positive direction and that s never a bad thing. 3. _ Throughout our lives people will try to shape our ideas, or even try and get us to do things we don t believe in, which is why you should alway
15、s be true to yourself. Make decisions for yourself, and never compromise who you are. 4. _ Life is a learning process in itself. Some people will make you feel bad about your mistakes, or insult1 you for making them. However, don t let that stand in your way from learning from them. Accept your mistakes fully and really figure out what we
