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1、WritingaletterIfyourfriendstartsmokingandaskyoutosmoketogetherwhatshouldyoudoWhatdidyouseedoharmtoCauseillnessdiseaseaccidentabadhabitwastemoneyAdviseherhimtostopsmokingkeepfriendshipCanyoutalkabouttheharmofsmokingDearCanyouhelpmepleaseMybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking.IdonotlikeitandItoldherwhatIth
2、ought.ShelaughedatmeandsaidthatIwasnotgrown-upenough.ThensheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassedandawkward.Ididnotknowhowtorefuseit.Pleasehelpme.IdonotwanttostartsmokingbutIdonotwanttolosemybestfriendeither.YourssincerelyLixiaolei审题whatmustwepayattentiontowhenwritingtheletter思考的问题分析Person(第几人称)W
3、ritingstyle(文章体裁)Writingtopic(文章主题)Writingorder(文章顺序)Writingtense(文章时态)thesecondperson（第二人称）Letterofsuggestion（建议信）Nosmokingkeepfriendship（Thelogicalorder（逻辑顺序）Thepresenttense(一般现在时）NosmokingdoharmtoCauseillnessdiseaseaccidentabadhabitwastemoneyKeepfriendshipgoodfriendsadviseherkeepbreakfriendshipst
4、opsmokingWhatevershechoosesListkeypointsdoesharmtocausesdiseasesIsabadhabitPolishyoursentencesSentencepatternAdj.advMakesentencesSmokingPeopleSmokingSmokingSmokingwastesmoneySmokingcausesaccidentsit”canbeusedassubjectAttributiveclausesmokingisabadhabitdoesharmtopeopleshealthcausingalotofdiseasesfore
5、xamplelungcancer.itwastesmuchmoney.carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfiressmokingisharmful.apassageLinkword.whichBesidessoMeanwhilewhichmeanwhilebesidesso熟悉结构巧用模板最终成文ThestructureofthisletterHeading(开头）-Body（主体）-Ending(结尾）-ExpressyourunderstandingandanalysisoftheproblemConvincingreasonsorevidenceGiveyo
6、urbestwishesAnalysisofproblem(分析问题）DearXiaoleiIamsorryyouhavefoundyourselfinsuchadifficultsituation.firstthereisnoneedforyoutofeelembarrassedandawkward.shemaythinkthatsheisbehavinginagrownupway.HereissomeadvicethatIthinkyoumightgiveher.Asweallknowsmokingisabadhabitwhichdoesharmtopeopleshealthcausing
7、alotofdiseasesforexamplelungcancer.Meanwhileitwastemuchmoney.Besidescarelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfiressosmokingisharmful.headingbodyBeginningsentences对对方理解乐意帮忙PreparetogiveadviceSecondtalktoyourfriendgentlyandexplainthatyouarestillgoodfriendsanddontwanttobreakthisfriendship.HoweverIwillnotbeginsm
8、okingtosuither.givehertheinationaboveandthenexplainthatwhatevershechoosestodoyouwillremainherfriend.DontbedisappointedXiaoleiGoodluckandbestwishesLucyendingEndingsentences(祝愿）bodyHowtowritetheletterstepsreadtherequirementscarefullyandanalyzeitlistthekeypointsmakesentencesandpolishitapassagethroughpa
9、ssagepatternstep1step2step3step4表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingyadviceonhowtoImverygladtoandgiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtoItismypleasuretodoItisapitythatIamsorrythat提建议的句式YoucandoItisusefulhelpfulimportantnecessaryforyoutodoInmyopinionitwouldbebetterifyoudoItshouldbeagoodideaforyout
10、odoItwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth.Italsohelpstodosth.Itdoesharmtosb.sth.=Itisharmfultobenefits=bebeneficialto=dogoodtoThefollowingismyviewopinionsHereissomeadvicethat.表意见并列的连词FirstlyAboveallFirstofallBesidesInadditionMoreoverIngeneralPersonallyInmyopinionIhopetohearfromyousoon.Ihopetohearfromyousoon
11、.Ilookforwardtoournextmeeting.Ilookforwardtoournextmeeting.Hopingforanearlyreply.Hopingforanearlyreply.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YouhavemybestwishesforyourYouhavemybestwishesforyourWithgoodwishGoodluckandbestwishes结束语假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点
12、：参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeterImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._BestwishesLiHuaDearBobImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstitisimportantto.Thenitalsohelpsto.Besidesitshouldbeagoodideato.Youcana
13、lso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).SincerelyyoursLiHuaDearPeterImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.FirstitisimportanttotakeaChinesecourseasyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.ThenitalsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooksn
14、ewspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.BesidesitshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongsbecausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.InadditionYoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.Iamlookingforwardtoyourletter.SincerelyyoursLiHua
