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1、基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) 假设你是王明，本周是你们学校“环境保护宣传周”，请根据下列提示的要点， 为宣传栏写引言，介绍保护珍稀动物的必要性。 写作内容 1动物是人类亲密的朋友，尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界变得丰富多彩 ； 2最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人为伤害，深表震惊。事件的发 生源于有些人对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心； 3牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责，我们应采取积极、有效的措施。 写作要求 1请根据以上提示内容写一篇短文，只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2第一句已给出，不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Animals are
2、 our friends._ _ 人称： 第一人称，we 时态： 整体用一般现在时，个别用具体时态。 尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界 变得丰富多彩 简化：珍稀动物使世界丰富多彩。 句一： rare animals make the world colorful. Animals, especially the rare ones are making the world more colorful and so more beautiful. Without animals, especially the rare ones, the world would not be as beautif
3、ul as it is now. 最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人 为伤害，深表震惊。事件的发生源于有些人 对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心。 理解简化： 1.最近，我们听到一个消息。 2. 动物，甚至是动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到 人为伤害。 3. 我们深表震惊。 1 . Recently, we have heard a piece of news. 2. Animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 3 . We are very shocked. 1 . Recently, we ha
4、ve heard a piece of news. 2. Animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 3 . We are very shocked. 三句简单句合并成一句复合句： 句二：Recently, we have heard that, animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings, at which we are very shocked. 1.最近，我们听到一个消息。 2. 动物，甚至是
5、动物园里的珍稀动物都遭 到人为伤害。 3. 我们深表震惊。 一三句合并： 句二：Recently, we have been shocked to hear the news that animals, even those in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 句二：Recently, we have heard a shocking news that animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 事件的发生源于有些人对保护动物认识不 够及对动物漠不关心
6、。 简化： 1.事情的发生是因为 2. 有些人对保护动物认识不够 3.有些人对动物漠不关心。 1.事情的发生是因为 2. 有些人对保护动物认识不够 3.有些人对动物漠不关心。 1. The reason (why such things happen) is that 2.Some people lack awareness of animal protection. Some people dont know much about animal protection. 3. Some people are indifferent to animals Some people are not
7、concerned about animals. Some people dont care about animals 合并：句三： The reason (why such things happen) is that some people lack awareness of animal protection and they are indifferent to / are not concerned about / dont care about animals. 牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责，我 们应该采取积极、有效的措施。 理解简化： 1.我们应该牢牢记得 2. 保护珍稀
8、动物是我们每个人的职责。 3. 我们应该采取积极、有效的措施（去保护动物。） 1.we should keep in mind that/ well remember that 2. It is our responsibility/ duty to protect the animals. Protecting animals is our responsibility. 3. we should take active/positive and effective measures to protect them. Active/positive and effective should
9、be taken to protect the animals. 1.we should keep in mind that/ well remember that 2. It is our responsibility/ duty to protect the animals. Protecting animals is our responsibility. 3. we should take active/positive and effective measures to protect them. Active/positive and effective measures shou
10、ld be taken to protect the animals. 合并： 句四：We should keep in mind that it is our responsibility to protect the animals. 句五：Active and effective measures should be taken to protect the animals. Without animals, especially the rare ones, the world would not be as beautiful as it is now. Unfortunately,
11、 recently, we have heard that, animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings, at which we are very shocked. The reason (why such things happen) is that some people lack awareness of animal protection and they dont care about animals. Therefore, we should keep in mind that it
12、 is our responsibility to protect the animals. More importantly, active and effective measures should also be taken to protect the animals. Animals are our friends, especially/particularly the rare animals make our world more colorful. Recently I hear that the rare animals in the zoos were injured by people. Rare animals are suffered from These things originate from These things happened on the grounds that Someone/ somebody lack of awareness of animal protection. Existance Closed friends.
