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1、第四讲讲 巧妙遣词词造句，实现实现 升级级策略 (2014高考新课标课标 全国卷)一家英语报语报 社向中学生征文,主题题 是“十年后的我”。请请根据下列要点和你的畅畅想完成短文。 1家庭； 2工作； 3业业余生活。 注意：1.词词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节细节 ，以使行文连贯连贯 ； 3开头语头语 已为为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. _ 满满分作文： _would like to give an excellent picture of my future life(很好地描绘绘 我未来的生活
2、) in ten years.To begin with(首先)，I will make every effort to take good care of my family，especially my aged grandfather because he has _(奉 献大部分生活养育两代人)_work is concerned (就 工作而言)，I am determined to become a film - maker_ (那种情况下)，I shall direct many good movies for the audience.During holiday seasons
3、，I will live in the I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. devoted most of his life to bringing up two generations As far as In that case countryside， _(在那里空气 新鲜鲜，人们们友善)I will enjoy so many interesting activities ，_ (例如) fishing, swimming and visiting old friends. Such will be my f
4、uture life，one I have been _ (梦想) where air is fresh and people are friendly such as dreaming of 温馨提示1.巧用词汇，give an excellent picture of，to begin with，devote.to；bring up；As far as work is concerned，in that case；such as；dream of 2该该句是一个含原因状语语从句的复合句，逻辑严逻辑严 密， 用词词准确，语义连贯语义连贯 。 As far as work.is concern
5、ed的运用使句子紧紧凑。 定语语从句的使用，符合评评分标标准对对复杂杂句式的要求。 倒装句和定语语从句巧妙结结合，与首句相呼应应，体现现了语语 篇的完整性。 一、遣词词方面： 1措辞要贴贴切具体 试试比较较下面句子：一个人正在街上闲闲逛。 A man is walking down the street. A man is wandering down the street. 通过过比较较可以看出，前一句不如后一句表达得具体、生动动。 一个词词如果内涵越具体，那么在特定的场场景中恰当地使用它, 就会收到意想不到的效果。 2要善于运用短语语 短语语用得好，会给评给评 卷老师师留下深刻印象。例如：
6、 When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything.(普通) When he was a child，he had a strong appetite(胃口)for knowledge.(高级级) 二、造句方面： 1巧用非谓语动词谓语动词 运用非谓语动词谓语动词 ，可使文句看起来更简洁简洁 ，使语语言更加丰 富多彩，重点更加突出，增加文采。 I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，but failed. 2巧用with复合结结构 “with名词词/代词词现现在分词词/过过去分词词/形容词词/
7、副词词/介词词 ”结结构，常作伴随状语语以增加被描绘绘内容的生动动性和情感性 ，使文章读读起来更简洁简洁 明了。试试比较较： He slept all the night and the window was open.(一般) He slept all the night with the window open.(高级级) 3巧用复合句 评评分标标准中强调调使用语语法结结构的数量和复杂杂性，鼓励考生 尽量使用较较复杂杂的结结构，并且对对由此产产生的错误错误 采取了宽宽 容的态态度。如果恰当运用各类类从句，就会增加文章的亮点。 Soon I became one of the top stu
8、dents in my class，which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.(定语语 从句) 4巧用倒装句、感叹叹句、强调调句、虚拟语拟语 气句等 使用这这些句式可使文章化平淡为为生动动，加强语语气，使评评卷 老师师感受作者的强烈情感，起到升级级文章的作用。 Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly equipped classroom，I found the teachers patient and considerate.(倒装句) 5巧
9、用排比等句式 如能运用一个个排比句、对对偶句、不定式或短语语，可使文章 增色不少，会给评给评 卷老师师眼前一亮的感觉觉。 The purpose of the program is to make our school more beautiful，to make the air cleaner and fresher，and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. 亮点词句： _ _ _ _ _ full of warmth，love and laughter；show concern for；I
10、f；is more likely to be；Otherwise；Meanwhile；are sure to； Since；plays a very important role in；it is up to； contribute to；First of all；pay more attention to；Besides； communicate with；As；If we do so .巧用遣词词造句，升级级下面文章 留意一下我们们的周边边，可以发现发现 陪读现读现 象很普遍。请请你根 据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应应包括： 1简简要描述陪读现读现 象； 2分析父母陪读读的原因(2至3个)；
11、 3发发表你对对此的看法。 注意：1.词词数：120150； 2标题标题 已给给出，不计计入总词总词 数。 Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School _ _ _ _ _ _ _ In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern. These parents are willing to leave their hometown， even quit their j
12、obs to follow their children into the campus.Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to their children.Meanwhile，it enables them to keep track of their childrens academic performance. Nevertheless，what they have ignored
