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1、1,如何在写作中避免句式单一,一、如何做到句式灵活？ 1)并列句 2)复合句 (定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构,Ex:按要求改写下列句子。 1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句) English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought
2、 of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (合并为并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.,3) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more than two thousand years. (合并为定语从句) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, w
3、hich has a history of more than two thousand years. July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. He began his famous voyage on July 11. (合并为定语从句) July 11, when He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.,5) I will not be able to meet you
4、 at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句) I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day. The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a computer. (合并为状语从句) Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in on
5、ly two hours with a computer.,7) In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.(合并为名词性从句) It is a fact that in the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. 8) The weather was fine. We went to visit the ZhongShan Park. (独立主格结构) The weather being fine,
6、we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.,9) You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties. (非谓语+倒装句) Never should you give up when faced with difficulties. 10) When a man and a woman meet, the woman first offers her hand. (改为强调句) When a man and a woman meet, it is the woman who first off
7、ers her hand.,11) 众所周知, 吸烟危害健康。 （一句多译） a. It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health. b. As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health. c. Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to peoples health.,Rewrite the sentences,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere
8、. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance, I will succeed.,Given a
9、nother chance, I will succeed.,In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to spea
10、k, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 3，做完作业后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product made a great success.,Hav
11、ing finished his homework, he returned home.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装
12、句) 1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好. 3.只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习.,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water， can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,5. 他是个孩子，却知道很多。 6.
13、墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”.,Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”.,As soon as Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Li Ming and his wife Li Ming and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment th
14、ey arrived at the airport. No sooner had Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and color
15、ful. _ which_ With the development of _ _ _ _so _ that_ _,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant,Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,句式多样 文章增“靓”,一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三. 尝试多样化表达方式,为了增强短文的连贯性，使表达流畅自然，要巧用关联词。请熟记和用好以下的关联词语： A、表并列：besides, in addition, wh
