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1、7步成文第七步网上阅卷眼神倦,誊写切记“字要端”通过以上六步的逐步落实,细节完善,一篇美文已经形成,但若要保证完美还得整洁地誊写到卷面上,也就是提升书面表达的“颜值”。因为阅卷老师在有限的时间里必须快速高效地评卷,书写潦草的卷面会使长时间工作已经很疲劳的阅卷老师产生厌倦,留下不好的印象。因此字体工整、卷面整洁的文章更容易吸引眼球、先声夺人,并得到阅卷老师的认真对待,也更容易被发现亮点。卷面书写应符合英文书写习惯,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称,无涂改、增补现象,切忌乱涂乱画。(为避免卷面涂鸦,建议考生在写作时一定要先写草稿,再修改,后誊写)一、不比不知道,一比吓一跳典例感悟(2018北京高考
2、书面表达第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim, Yours,Li Hua让阅卷老师厌倦的试卷类型典型示例评卷厌倦点1.出现了书信格式错误,开头格式就不对。2.书写潦草,有涂改、增补现象。3.有较多的单词拼写错误、词性应用错误、高级词汇使用错误。4.有较多的语法错误,根本不会使用高级句式。5.表达不地道,出现了大量的汉语式英语。6.语言基
3、础不扎实,整篇文章找不到一个令人感觉良好的句子。让阅卷老师喜欢的试卷类型典型示例评卷兴奋点1.外在美书写规范,卷面整洁,给人赏心悦目之感。2.结构美段落层次合理,条理清晰。很好地利用了“三段式”作文法:第一段:表明写信的目的表示欢迎;第二段:具体说明推荐的学校及专业;第三段:希望对方梦想成真。3.词汇美选词准确,能灵活运用高级词汇,语言功底深厚。4.句式美句式多变,长短句结合,能灵活运用非谓语动词等高级句式。5.衔接美内容连贯,衔接自然,结构紧凑,能有效地使用句子间、段落间的衔接词和过渡语。二、不求写“凤舞”,但求写工整典例感悟假定你是李华,最近你校将举办“外国学生讲中国故事”的活动。请你给在
4、中国留学的英国留学生Jack写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I hope everything is going on well with you. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua考前临摹增2分近年来高考英语写作的命题坚持的思想就是高起点低落点。题目起点很高,突出体现在一些书面表达的话题涉及中国优秀传统文化和社会主义核心价值观。但是最终要将这些中国文化、中国故事、中国礼仪等抽象概念体现在具体的
5、考生生活实际中,体现在考生熟悉的生活中,这就是低落点。这种高起点低落点现象有利于考生充分发挥自己的写作水平,但对平时靠死记硬背、不注重生活积累的考生来说是一个巨大的挑战。我们在此创编8个热点话题,旨在让考生开阔视野,熟悉并掌握当前的一些热点命题素材。热点话题押题练(一)中国传统文化.作文升格题目假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习。你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺,并希望她有机会来中国深造。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。问题作文Dea
6、r Lucy,Im pleased to learn youve just won the first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. Im writing to offer my congratulations to you. I know you love Chinese culture, and now youre studying in a local Confucius Institute. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for
7、 further study.Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours,Li Hua我来升格(词数扩充,词汇、句式升级)Dear_Lucy,Im_pleased_to_learn_youve_just_won_the_first_prize_in_the_Chinese_poetry_competition_held_in_your_institute._Im_writing_to_offer_my_sincere_congratulations_to_you._It_came_as_no_surprise_t
8、o_me_because_I_know_you_love_Chinese_culture,_especially_Chinese_poetry,_and_youve_been_studying_in_a_local_Confucius_Institute_for_years._Im_so_proud_to_see_all_your_efforts_have_paid_off._I_hope_you_can_have_a_chance_to_come_to_China_for_further_study_in_the_near_future_and_have_a_better_understan
9、ding_of_my_country.Wish_you_greater_progress_in_the_study_of_Chinese_poetry.Yours,Li_Hua.整篇训练假定你是李华。你的英国笔友David对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp),请你给他发一封电子邮件告诉他该夏令营活动的相关信息,内容包括:1时间和地点;2内容:学习汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化等;3报名方式和截止时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考范文:Dear David,Here comes good
10、 news. A Chinese Summer Camp, intended for foreign students, is to be held by our school this summer vacation. Since you show great interest in Chinese culture, Id like to invite you to join it.The summer camp is scheduled to last 13 days, from July 20th to August 1st, which covers a wide variety of
11、 cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese to attending some lectures on Chinese history and Chinese traditional culture. Im convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from the language study. By admiring the historical relics, you will definitely gain a better understanding o
12、f the country.If you want to take part, please sign up for it before July 10th on our school website. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua热点话题押题练(二)校园生活.作文升格题目假定你是李华,你校将于2019年5月16日在学校体育馆组织一次慈善义卖活动。请根据以下要点给你校外籍教师Mr. John写一封信,邀请他一起参加。1活动介绍(时间、地点、物品等);2活动意义;3盼回复参与意向。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以
13、使行文连贯。参考词汇:义卖活动charity sale体育馆 stadium问题作文Dear Mr. John,How is everything going? Know that you are a warmhearted man and enthusiastic about charity activities, Im writing to invite you to take part in an charity sale.The activity will be held at the school stadium in May 16th, 2019, from 8:00 am to
14、12:00 am. There is varieties of item, such as books, earphones, computers, pens and so on.As far as Im concerned, it is an interested and meaningful activity. It can raise peoples charity awareness as well as develop the habit of helping people in the need. Whats more, this is also a rare opportunity to develop our ability design and organize activities.Please let me know if you will come or not as soon as possible. Im looking forward to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua我来升格(改正文中10处错误)答案:第二句:KnowKnowing; ana第三句:i