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1、你不可不知的词汇学奥秘 主讲：华兹华斯教育 英语老师 课程地址： 解剖SAT写作通病 汤儒涵 What 25分钟 400字 议论文 Not a test of writing, but of thinking and expressing 8分分9分分10分分 700 的错误 2题4题5题 考察的技能 logical reasoning creative thinking persuasion 评分重点 切题全面切题全面 论证有力论证有力 例子合理例子合理 高分词汇高分词汇 句式种类句式种类 写作速度写作速度 病症1：切题不到位 Should people respect and tolera
2、te about others opinion, or should they take stands against opinion that they think are wrong? Does accepting the values of a group allow people to avoid taking responsibility for their own thoughts and actions? People talk too much about their feelings. They share their deepest secrets and innermos
3、tthoughtsontelevisiontalkshows.Theywriterevealing autobiographies. They buy books that advise them to tell others about their feelings. We would be far better off if we followed the advice of Florence Nightingale, a pioneer in the field of nursing, who thought that people too often waste their feeli
4、ngs by talking about them and should instead turn their feelings intoactions thatbringresults. Assignment: Is it better for people to act on their feelings than to talk about them? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and
5、 examples taken from your reading, studies,experience, or observations. 病症2：忽略反方观点 Does solving old problems lead to new ones? Albeit rare situations do exist in which a problem seems to be resolved completely, in most cases, ending a single problem would inevitably prompt a train of complications.
6、病症3：硬套例子 Does accepting the values of a group allow people to avoid taking responsibility for their own thoughts and actions? “老师，这个题的用两人group的例子行吗，比 如Marx&Engels“ Do the benefits of scientific and technological developments come at the cost of undesirable changes to peoples lives? Should books port
7、ray the world as it is or as it should be? Albeit many books have done a perfect job to carve the reality into peoples mind, I still believe books should portray the world as it should be for books are meant to inspire people. 然后举23本书的例子JK Rowling的Harry Potter描绘了儿童想 看到的世界，Sir Thomas More 的Utopia描绘了一
8、个理想的世 界（http:/en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Utopia） George Owell的1984用描述了一个可怕的世界，作为反例 inspire人们去创造更好的世界 http:/en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nineteen_Eighty-Four SHould heroes be defined as people who say what they think when we ourselves lack the courage to say it? Albeit this might have reflected a glimpse of trai
9、t of heroes, I do not think we can simply identify such kind of people as heroes. Having the courage to say something does not mean having the courage to actually do something, hence, cannot make one a hero. 例子：Martin Luther King，Jr（he is regarded as a hero not simply because of his speech, but beca
10、use of what he has done) ( Hester Pryne in The Scarlet Letter is a hero. Although she has said nothing and endured everything, her spirit, perseverance and courage identifies her as a hero 病症4&5：缺少论点和回证 观点 论点 例子 回证 病症6：废话太多 Lance Edward Armstrong, honored as the most gifted American road-racing cycl
11、ist, could not gain the unparalleled reputation of winning the Tour de France a record seven consecutive times without the unremitting efforts of his group. Initially presumptuous, regarding his former success as his own achievement, Armstrong failed to draft with group and, thus suffered an unprece
12、dented and crushing defeat at the 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, a failure that drewhim to theabyss ofshame and regret. After he expressly realized the value of group cooperation, he spent numerous amount of time practicing and thrashing out togetherwithhis team members. As a result, Arms
13、trong successfully scaled the summit of his cycling career through a perfect performance of terrific teamwork in 1998 Tour de France, afterwards claiming championshipfor seven times. Had he obdurately disregard the value of group cooperation, he could never revive after his first defeat, and ergo wa
14、ste his talentand potential. Group is like the oasis in the arid desert, giving despairingindividualshopeandinspiration. Group is like the sunlight in the chilling winter, melting the glacial thwartingones progress. Groupislikethethespotlightinthe navigation during the night, avoiding peoples disorientation. 病症1：切题不到位 病症2：忽略反方观点 病症3：硬套例子 病症4&5：缺少论点和回证 病症6：废话太多 谢谢大家
