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1、韩老师编辑2017届高三二轮复习英语精品资料【练案】专题9 短文改错2015全国卷 第四部分写作（共两节满分35分）第1节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I was a child, I
2、hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that
3、global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .【答案】76. think thought 77. countryside前加the78. orand79. onw
4、ith 80. been去掉81. seriouslyserious82. airsair 83. muchmany 84. foundfind85. yourour2015全国卷 第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词作斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限
5、一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were m
6、issing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【答案】71. parent改为parents72. on改为i
7、n73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that 或者去掉 where76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly75. where改为that 或者去掉 where found后面的宾语从句是陈述句，故where改为that或者去掉where。【2014新课标】 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cher
8、ry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we a
9、llow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!【解析】试题分析：本文叙述了五年前，在父亲的帮助下，作者和姐姐在后花园里种植了一些圣女果，这些年以来，它的种子我们没有管过，在院子里随处疯长，结果院子里到处都是圣女果，于是我们就把它们分给邻居吃。感觉心里很高兴。【2014新课标】 My dream schoo
10、l starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didnt need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day
11、 .My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .【答案】listening
12、 后加to。考查固定短语。or sat by the lake listening music。Listen是不及物动词，后面不能跟宾语，固定短语listen to 意思是“听”，所以在listening后加to。helpfully helpful考查形容词和副词。The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知识：系动词后要跟形容词做表语，所以把helpfully改为helpful。【2013新课标】I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and si
13、ng old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town
14、, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 【2013新课标】The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. H
15、ave tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.9
