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1、写作宝典本书是从词汇及句法两个方面对2009年6月到2006年6月的历年四级作文范文加以详细解释,旨在向学习者充分体现词汇、词组及句法在作文中的综合运用。一、大学英语四级作文题型分析写作部分(Writing)是考试中的第一道题,在第一张答题卡的正面。写作选用的都是考生所熟悉的题材。这部分是要测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力,所占分值比例为15%,考试时间是30分钟。大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教学要求中的一般要求,即“能完成一般性写作任务,能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等,能写常见的应用文,能就一般性话题或提纲在规定的时间内写出至少120词的短文,内容基本完整,用词恰当,语意连
2、贯。”四级作文体裁多样,包括叙述文、说明文、议论文等。从近些年的考题来看,作文考题不再是一种体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。下面是具体的写作要求及四级作文评分标准:l 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作,思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误;写作部分考核的技能是:A 思想表达1 表达中心思想2 表达重要或特定信息3 表达观点、态度等B 篇章组织4 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述,突出重点5 连贯地组句成段,组段成篇C 语言运用6 运用恰当的词汇7 运用正确的语法8 运用合适的句子结构9 使用正确的标点符号10 运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)D 写作格式11 运用正确
3、的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式l 四级作文的评分标准1. 本题满分为15分2. 阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。3. 评分标准2分 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但是有少量语言错误。14分 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。【注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。】4. 字
4、数不足应酌情扣分:累计字数CET 4110-119100-10990-9980-8970-7960-6950-5949扣 分12345679 (摘自大学英语四级考试大纲)二、历年新题型大学英语四级考试作文范文详解2009年6月大学英语四级考试作文题目:Free Admission to Museums要求:1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放,目的是 2. 有的人认为这样做会带来一些问题。 3. 在我看来范文:Free Admission to MuseumsNowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to vi
5、sitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to this live database, can most peo
6、ple fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations. As a result,
7、our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treas
8、ures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visito
9、rs or set some closed days for museums for regular maintenance. Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.Notes:用词方面 词汇使用:1. awareness n. 意识 consciousness, perception2. regarding prep. 关于 with respect to, concerning3. urgency n.
10、紧急;迫切 sth. urgent4. offer v.& n.(主动)给予;(主动)提供give5. obvious adj. 显而易见的;清楚的;明显的clear, self-evident, apparent6. impede n. 妨碍,阻止hinder7. sustainable adj. 可持续的 able to be maintained 8. attract v. 吸引fascinate, charm, appeal to9. potential adj. 潜在的 hidden, likely10. maintenance n. 维护,维修care词组使用:1. home an
11、d abroad 国内外2. (have/get) access to sth. 对的使用3. lead to sth. 导致,引发,造成(相当于cause,同义词组还有:bring about, result in, contribute to,etc.)4. as well 也(相当于too)5. (be) in favor of 支持,赞成句法、篇章结构方面过渡词:nowadays(表时间),as(表原因),however(表转折),as a result(表结果),on the other hand(表对比,比较),yet(表转折),for example(表列举,举例)句型:1. a
12、n increasing number of + C n. pl. 越来越多的。类似用法还有:an increasing amount of + U n.2. Only with free access to this live database, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.only引导的状语置于句首,主句要部分倒装。相同用法在范文中还有:Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon a
13、nd have sustainable development.3. As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control.which引导非限定性定语从句。范文中还有:On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purpo
14、sed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.4. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it.常用表达句型:主语从句:It is proposed/advised that,it作形式主语。类似的句型还有:It is estimated/well-
15、known/reported/said that.; It is true/important/necessary that,etc.2008年12月大学英语四级考试作文题目:Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags要求:1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2. 造成的问题3. 限制使用的意义范文:Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic BagsFor many years we have been using disposable plastic bags when we are shopping on the market, and most often these bags are offered by the shops for free. This, u