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1、Section Writing 如何写新闻报道文体感知新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作规范题目要求星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；2活动的过程；3你对于这次活动的评论。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题谋篇一、审题1体裁：记叙文；2话题：报道活动；3人称：第三人称；4时态：叙述事件用一般过去时；评论用一般现在时。二、构思第一段：点出活动的时间、地
2、点、人物和目的；第二段：描写活动的过程；第三段：谈谈对活动的认识。第二步：词汇推敲1take_outdoor_exercise参加户外运动2set_off_for 动身去某地3in_high_spirits 情绪高涨4fall_behind 落在后面5be_of_great_benefit_to 对很有益处6organize_a_mountainclimbing_activity 组织爬山活动7enjoy_fresh_air 享受新鲜空气8get_close_to_nature 接近大自然第三步：句式锻造1为了鼓励同学们参加户外运动，我们学校于4月10日组织了登山活动。In_order_to_
3、encourage_the_students_to_take_outdoor_exercise,_our school organized a mountainclimbing activity on April 10.2我们几百个人参加了这项活动。Hundreds of us took_part_in this activity.3有些人落后了。Some fell_behind.4其他的人愿意来提供帮助。Others would come and offer_help.5我们沐浴在阳光下。We were bathed_in sunshine.6我们高兴得欢呼跳跃。We jumped and
4、cheered with_joy.7.这不仅让我们接近了大自然，从沉重的学业中得以放松，也增强了我们的友谊。It not only got us close_to nature and gave us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us.第四步：句式升级8用定语从句合并1、2句。In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing a
5、ctivity on April 10, which_hundreds_of_us_took_part_in.9用when合并3、4句。When_some_fell_behind,_others_would_come_and_offer_help.10用非谓语动词合并5、6句。Bathed_in_sunshine,_we jumped and cheered with joy.11用倒装句改写第7句。Not_only_did_it_get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also prom
6、oted the friendship among us.第五步：妙笔成篇_参考答案：In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing activity on April 10, which hundreds of us took part in.It was a fine day. At 8 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set off for the top in high s
7、pirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity is of great benefit to u
8、s. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!写作提升假设你是李华，是校英文报“环球实事”栏目组的小编辑，日本港口城市熊本发生了连续的地震，请根据下列要点写一篇报道。1地震的基本信息：前震：2017年4月14日晚上21点26分；震源深度11千米。主震：2017年4月16日凌晨1点25分；震源深度10千米。2伤亡情况：至少40人死亡、上千
9、人受伤、大量建筑倒塌起火、许多人搬出他们的家。3祝愿灾区早日重建。注意：1词数：100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词汇：熊本市 Kumamoto前震foreshock主震 main shock答案：The Kumamoto earthquakes are a series of earthquakes, including a main shock which struck at 01：25 am on April 16,2017, at a depth of about 10 km, and a foreshock earthquake at 9：26 pm on April
10、14, 2017, at a depth of about 11 km. The two earthquakes killed at least 40 people and more than one thousand people got injured. With so many buildings falling down and catching fire, a great number of people have moved out of their homes. We hope that people in the disaster area can lead a normal
11、life and have their beautiful homes rebuilt soon.增分佳句1陈述事实常用的句型：(1)A terrible storm hit/struck Japan.强风暴袭击了日本。(2)It was a cool autumn night when the accident happened.事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。(3)With the help of the rescue team, people who were trapped in the flood were saved.在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。2陈述观点常用的句型：Cle
12、arly/Obviously/In my opinion/It seemed that people were shocked.显然/在我看来/似乎人们震惊了。3揭示原因常用的句型：Because of/As a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately.因为/幸亏有军队的帮助，受伤的人们被立即送往医院。4总结全文常用的句型：In a word/To draw a conclusion/I believe we will build a new city.总之/我相信我们将重建一个新城。5
