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1、Summary writing,By Yang,2017高考新作文概况,PART I 应用文写作：80 20词 共15分 PART II 读后续写：原文350词左右 续写15020词 PART III 概要写作：原文350词左右 概要6020,A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 牛津高阶英汉双解词典,读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。,It is a brief, tho
2、rough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.,Mary is a beautiful girl who always smiles to others. Mary is a girl. Contain the main idea Ignore the unnecessary details,a 60-word summary use your own words in the third person with a brief sentence connectio
3、n between sentences(句子衔接),Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purpose Step 2. Divide the passage & summarize the main idea of each part Step 3. Highlight the key information of each part Step 4. Make an outline of the passage Step 5. Write the first dr
4、aft Step 6. Revise the summary,提炼 要点 整合,删除细节 删除具体例子（引用一两个说明问题即可） 避免重复,同义转换: 近义词、同义词等替换 语言 句子重构: 调整词类、时态、语态等,逻辑：衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接 ）,During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more hu
5、manistic attitude to life. At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were. Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings, so they could decorate their superb palaces and great houses. They paid famous art
6、ists to paint pictures of themselves, their houses and possessions, as well as their activities and achievements. One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective. This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428. When people first saw his paintings, th
7、ey were convinced that they were looking through a hole in the wall at a real scene. If the rules of perspective had not been discovered, no one would have been able to paint such realistic pictures. By coincidence, oil paints were also developed at this time, which made the colours used in painting
8、s look richer and deeper. Without the new paints and the new technique, we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.,The Renaissance (15th to 16th century),Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purpose,确定体裁，明确主
9、题 体裁： 主题：,记叙文,文艺复兴时期的艺术,Step 2. Divide the passage & summarize the main idea of each part,明确文章结构,Para 2,A .,B .,Para 1,Para 1,Para 2,Step 3. Highlight the key information of each part 划主题句与关键信息,During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. People bega
10、n to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life. At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were. Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings, so they could decorat
11、e their superb palaces and great houses. They paid famous artists to paint pictures of themselves, their houses and possessions, as well as their activities and achievements.,The Renaissance (15th to 16th century),Para 1,Topic Sentence: “During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replace
12、d ” Idea 1: “People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.” Idea 2: “At the same time painters returned to classical people and nature as they really were.” Example: “Rich people wanted to ”,One of the most important discoveries during this period
13、 was how to draw things in perspective. This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428. When people first saw his paintings, they were convinced that they were looking through a hole in the wall at a real scene. If the rules of perspective had not been discovered, no one would have been able to p
14、aint such realistic pictures. By coincidence, oil paints were also developed at this time, which made the colours used in paintings look richer and deeper. Without the new paints and the new technique, we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.,The Renai
15、ssance (15th to 16th century),Para 2,Topic Sentence: “One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective.” Information about perspective: Put forward: Masaccio; 1428 Content: “looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.” Assistance: “By coincidence,
16、oil paints were also developed ”,Step 4. Make an outline of the passage,Para 1,Topic Sentence: Idea 1: Idea 2:,Para 2,Topic Sentence: Information about perspective: Put forward: Content: Assistance:,Step 5. Write the first draft,Para 1,Topic Sentence: During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. Rewrite: In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago.,viewpoints,new ideas and
