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1、写作（演讲稿）,高三英语组：张莉,课程安排：,1.讲评考试作文题目及写作技巧；2.当堂评改学生考试过程中所写作文；3.范文示例；4.类似题材分析；5.尝试写作；6.点评范文。,题目要求 (2011江西高考) 假设你是成都七中（星光中学）的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、 有利健康等。,参考词汇：低碳生活 lowcarbon life节能 energy saving注意：1. 词数： 120词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出， 且该部分不计入总词数。
2、 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Chengdu No. 7 High School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”_ Thank you !,技法指导 演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。写好演讲稿，应注意以下三点：1格式 演讲稿一般由三部分组成，即：称呼语(Greetings)、正文(Body)和结束语(Closing)。常见的称呼语有Ladies and gentlemen, Friends, Boys and
3、 girls等，一般称呼语前不使用Dear。,2内容 演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。第二部分的内容应该提出发言稿的主题，如欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。,3语言 演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。,第一步构建框架，清晰行文 谋篇布局第二步打造亮句，增色文章第三步串句成文，保证流畅,第一步构建框架，清晰行文 谋篇布局,黄金模板Boys
4、 and girls/Ladies and gentlemen, Its a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is _(自我介绍). The topic of my speech is _(发言主题),To begin with, many people suggest that . Secondly, . Thirdly .(话题或现象列举) What I want to stress is that _(重申主题). For one thing, . For another, . Besides, .
5、(原因或重要性列举). In a word, _(总结) Thank you for your listening./Thank you.,第二步打造亮句，增色文章1我认为，骑自行车是一个好的解决办法。 In my opinion, it is a good solution to ride bicycles. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution.,2众所周知，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成为一种很受欢迎的交通方式。Its known to all /that with the improvement of
6、peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport.,第三步串句成文，保证流畅 Lets ride bicycles Hello everyone,Im lihua from chengdu middle school , Im glad to stand here, an
7、d the topic of speech is lets ride bicycles. As we all know, with the steady growth of peoples living standards, people have enough money to pay for cars. That bring more convenience for us. But cars also bring some bad problems to us. For example, the more cars in life the more crowded in life, whi
8、ch is easy to cause traffic jams. Whats more, cars not only cause air pillution but also ruin our health.,What a serious problem is, and how to solve it. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good way. With the globle warming so that we should learn to energy saving and low-carbon life. Ridin
9、g bicycles can do it. In addition, riding bicycles can keep our fit and reduce traffic jams. Its also help us do more exersise to keep health. So lets ride bicycles to protect our homes. Im looking forward to you joining us.,范文示例：Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Chengdu No. 7 High School. Th
10、e topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.,How can we s
11、olve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to
12、exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you!,典题示例 (2010四川) 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1过去对成年的向往；2现在的感受和认识；3将来的目标及措施。 参考词汇：责任responsibility,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增
13、加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup”_Thank you for listening.,写作点拨： 这是一篇演讲稿体裁的半开放式作文。命题者从“过去现在将来”三个时间阶段出发，给考生一个自由发挥的空间，并考查学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作时要避免逐词逐句翻译，除了语言基本功外还要注意好句子的运用，出一些闪光点。写作要点1.梦想着做某事：dream of doing2.表达目标：aim t
14、o/my purpose is to.3.有的责任：have responsibility for.,写作范文:Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup” As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grownup, but I
15、 find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. Thank you for listening.,
