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1、截图发朋友圈 share the pictures,1. 张博 （3）班 2. 黄心悦（6）班 3. 曹旭辉 （4）班 4. 陈琳（3）班 5. 冯圣杰（4）班 6. 郭子瑕（3）班 7. 邱新特（4）班 8. 金宸如（3）班 9. 朱澄镕（6）班 10. 林子心（6）班,读后续写,1. 读懂全文,who, when, where, what, how, why,2. 从文中获得重要的隐藏的线索,3. 分析给你的两段的开头句,第一段给你的第一句要与第二句有衔接,第一段最后一句与第二段第一句有衔接,三步走,1. vacationing v 度假 2. the Foggy Figure fgi f
2、g(r) 雾影 3. haunt h:nt 时常出现在 4. ghostly gstli 可怕的 5. creature kri:t(r) 生物 6. sniff snf 嗅，深深吸入 7. the faint scent fent sent 微弱的气味 8. strike strak struck 侵袭 9. dock dk 码头，船停靠码头 10. scary skeri 胆小的，可怕的,11. shrug rg 耸肩 12. barely beli 几乎不 13. lower l(r) 降低 14. hug hg 拥抱,who: when: where: weather: What:,J
3、ustin and Mary,Uncle Thomas,one day during the vacation,at 5:00 am,first at their uncles lake house,then at the boat dock,Foggy,The fog had settled over the lake, making it impossible to see anything,Uncle Thomas told Justin and Mary about the Foggy Figure that haunts the lake.,They determined to se
4、e the Foggy Figure.,1. 读懂全文,ghostly,frightening,scary,Whether did they see the Foggy Figure?,Thinking？,Is there the Foggy Figure?,Do you think Uncle Thomas was just trying to frighten us with that story?,2. 隐藏的线索 the hidden clues about the Foggy Figure,Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat
5、and then reached for Marys hand. Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then.,3. 分析两句开头句,things happened on the boat.,their frightened feelings.,The Foggy Figure appeared.,what is the Foggy Figure.,_ atmosphere,nervous and frightening,存在问题：,1. 没有下划线,2. 对话太多,3. 第一段最后一句与第二段第一句没有衔接,张淑雯 郑慧琳 夏晨辉
6、蔡佳佳 钟淇， 张博，罗慧杰 王佳慧 程卓瑶朱芮莹,五个档次：,第五档：21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档：11-15 第二档：6-10 第一档：1-5,Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Marys hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. “See anything?” They looked around,
7、and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary turned around and screamed. “The Foggy Figure!” It was in the boat with them!,Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved toward the Foggy Figure. “Uncle Thomas?”“I knew that story would get you two out of bed early
8、enough to take a boat ride with me.” Mary sighed, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. “What do you say? I packed a breakfast for us.” Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cakes for them, too. “Le
9、ts do it,” Mary and Justin said.,Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Marys hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. “See anything?” They looked around, and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary turn
10、ed around and screamed. “The Foggy Figure!” It was in the boat with them! Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved toward the Foggy Figure. “Uncle Thomas?”“I knew that story would get you two out of bed early enough to take a boat ride with me.” Mary sighe
11、d, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. “What do you say? I packed a breakfast for us.” Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cakes for them, too. “Lets do it,” Mary and Justin said.,存在问题：,1. 没有下划线,2. 对话太多,3. 第一段最后一句与第二段第一句没有衔接,李兼 吴振宇 邱子元 徐子皓,五个档次：,第五档：21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档：11-15 第二档：6-10 第一档：1-5,
